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Wolf Awareness Week & The Fantasy Wolf Pack That Found Its Name

I was reading a post by Charles Yallowitz about it being Wolf Awareness Week.

These beautiful animals are much misunderstood. It seems that their reputation is not completely true. Here’s a link for some information of wolf attacks from the International Wolf Center.

The poor reputation, nay, even scary one, is due to tales like ‘Little Red Riding Hood,’ ‘The Three Little Pigs,’ etc.

I was surprised to learn that there are 38 subspecies of wolf.

Wolves are social animals. They usually live in family groups comprising a mated pair and their offspring. They hunt as a pack, cooperating to bring down large herbivores. All will help to raise the cubs.

There are no wolves left in the UK, the last one being shot in Scotland near Killiecrankie in 1680, while English folklore places the final English wolfโ€™s death at Humphrey Head in the 14th century. As a result of this, there are no large predators to hunt the deer population, and so they have to be culled.

In Yellowstone National Park, in the USA, Wolves were not protected, the same as other large predators like cougar. Gradually they became exterminated.

The elk population then rose and decimated the vegetation. This had a knock on effect on the whole ecology. In 1995 the first wolves were released in Yellowstone, from Canada.

There has been talk of reintroducing wolves in the UK, but the problem is the density of the human population, as I see it, especially in England. There is also much understandable opposition from farmers, so I don’t think it’s gonna happen! If it does, it’ll probably be in Scotland where there is more uncultivated land.

If you are interested in learning more, there is a good Wikipedia post on them.

Talking of wolves, and wolf packs, you might like to read The Wolf Pack, Book 1 in The Wolves of Vimar series. Here is an extract where the group decides to call themselves Wolf.

As they sat, they heard a howl. It did not seem too near, but Kimi looked at Fero for confirmation of her assessment that there was no danger. Seeing Fero’s relaxed attitude, she allowed herself to relax too. Then they heard a sound from near the fire.

Fero looked round, and saw Thadora had woken at the sound of the howl, and sat bolt upright clutching her sword in her hand.

Fero went over to her.

โ€œIt’s all right, Thadda,โ€ he said, using her pet name to reassure her, โ€œThat is the cry of a normal wolf. They don’t attack people, especially a well-armed group like we are. Nor do they come near fire.โ€

โ€œThose others damn well did,โ€ she replied. Thadora looked around, wild-eyed.

Fero tried to reassure her. “That group was very strange. I told you at the time. A pair of unnaturally intelligent dire wolves led them. These others near here are just a normal pack.โ€

โ€œโ€œOw’d yer know?โ€ Thadora demanded.

โ€œI saw them yesterday when I went out to scout,โ€ he told her. โ€œWhen the others wake up, weโ€ll go and look at them. If you watch them for a while, you will see what they are truly like. They are not the fearsome beasts that people tell about in children’s stories, and tales related by travellers in the taverns. Those tales are all made up or greatly embroidered to frighten people or make the tellers seem brave and bold.โ€

The early morning saw Fero and Thadora moving through the forest towards where he had seen and heard the wolves. โ€œDo you know how to walk quietly, Thadora?โ€ asked Fero as they neared the place for which he was heading.

โ€œYou know it!โ€ came the reply. โ€œHey! It’s a requirement o’ th’ job o’ a bloody thief. It’d be so no use if yer wake folk by bangin’ about.โ€

Silently, they slipped through the rapidly lightning forest until they came out on an escarpment overlooking some flatter land. The trees disappeared here, and they could see the Grosmerian plain spread before them. To the east, the hills continued to rise to meet the mountains, but to the north and west the plains began.

Tracts of forest and open countryside separated small farmsteads They could just make out the lights coming on in Roffley, a day’s journey away, as people rose to their morning tasks.

Fero held out his hand to warn Thadora to be silent. They wormed their way forward on their stomachs, and looked down from the cliff top to the plain below. They found themselves about twenty feet above the plain here and below them they saw a pack of wolves.

Thadora watched the animals in fascination. They were obviously a closely-knit group, with the exception of one animal, much paler than the rest, who held itself aloof, or the others were ostracising it.

Fero whispered that she, (for it was a she-wolf, he told her) was a stranger, and probably trying to join the pack. She had not been there when he caught sight of them yesterday. Maybe she had lost her own pack. He told Thadora that pack sizes were usually between six and ten, but that ten was rare.ย  โ€œMore than about eight, and one kill would not suffice, and less than six and the pack would find it difficult to hunt down larger animals like deer,โ€ he whispered.

He pointed out the alpha male and female to her. The alpha male was a reddish brown animal, quite large, and the alpha female was a smaller, black creature. Fero told Thadora that as a rule, only these two would mate, and the others would help in the rearing of the cubs. Another large black male had begun to sniff at the pale she-wolf. She was cautious and bared her teeth at him, at the same time, crouching down, ears flattened to her head. Of the others, one, obviously much younger, had a reddish coat again. She was obviously one of the cubs of the alpha male. There was another black wolf, slightly smaller than the very large one, and two greyish ones, one of which was a small female and the other was a very small adult male. Fero thought that the smaller dark wolf and the greyish female were probably littermates, the way they seemed to stick to each otherโ€s company.

They watched for some time, and Thadora became fascinated. Then the large black wolf sniffed the air as the wind gusted and changed direction and he swung his head in their direction, gave a sharp bark, andturned and led his pack at a loping trot away from the cliff.

โ€œDamn!โ€ swore Fero, โ€œWind changed direction and he smelled us. We’d better get back to the others. They should be ready to leave and we’ve still got our things to pack up.โ€

โ€œThanks, Fero,โ€ said Thadora on their way back, โ€œBut, hey, those wolves didn’t seem scary. I don’t think I’ll be such a bloody wuss as far as wolves are concerned in future.โ€

Fero smiled.

When they got back to the camp, they found that the others had indeed packed up, including Fero and Thadora’s things, and Basalt had made oatmeal porridge that he said would sustain them well for their trek. Fero and Thadora sat and took the wooden bowls of porridge they were handed.

The group sat around eating, then when they were finished, they wiped out the bowls, tied them to their packs and were ready to leave.

Fero saw to it that they put the fire out completely before they left, and they returned to the road.

Thadora was very quiet as they walked along. She had a frown on her face. Fero hoped that what she had seen of the wolves would help her with her fear.

She came up to Fero and asked, โ€œ’Ow common are th’ colourings o’ that pack, like?โ€

โ€œWell nowโ€”wolves come in a range of colours ranging from very pale to black. However, the very pale coat of the she-wolf we saw trying to join the pack is not common this far south, although they are more so in the snowy north. Maybe that was why she didn’t have a pack. Sometimes albinos are turned out. However, she wasn’t a true albino. Her eyes were brown and she had some colour to her coat.โ€

โ€œHmm!โ€

When they stopped for a midday break, Thadora suddenly said, โ€œCarthinal, that poem about soddin’ wolves that you ‘ad, right? D’you still ‘ave it?โ€

โ€œSomewhere in one of my pockets. I expect. Did you want me to read it?โ€

โ€œNo, Mother taught me ter read, so I c’n read it by meself. She learned at Madame soddin’ Dopari’s, right? It were somethin’ th’ damn Madame insisted all th’ girls learn. Would yer lend it te’ me for a while?โ€

โ€œOf course. You can keep it. I don’t know why I’ve still got it, since it seems to have no relevance to us or our quest.โ€

Carthinal gave the poem to Thadora and she took it and began to read it.

All the afternoon, Thadora kept perusing the poem as they walked. No one seemed to be able to get anything out of her, and they all thought her behaviour a little odd and out of character, but she had obviously been working something out.

Fero thought she was trying to work through her fear of wolves, but Kimi had the feeling it was something more. She expressed her thoughts to Davrael.

โ€œI expect she’ll tell us when she’s good and ready, and not before,โ€ her husband replied. Davrael was a man of few words.

โ€œYes, you’re right of course,โ€ Kimi replied, linking her arm through his.

He placed his other hand over hers and smiled down at the small young woman with love. They continued in this way in silence.

Thadora did not reveal her thoughts until after they had stopped for the night. After they had eaten, she opened the paper with the poem on and began to read it aloud.

โ€œThe wolves will fight ‘gainst every foe
The balance to maintain,
But far and wide the pack must go
All borders they disdain.

โ€œThe pack contains the strangest group,
The one whose pride comes with her
And one who slips through every loop,
The wilful one, the tracker.

โ€œThe leader with his anger held,
The ones who hunt the horse
The rock that’s strong completes the meld
And makes the pack a force.

โ€œIn times of danger all must know
The wolf pack will be there.
They work as one. They keep their vow.
For each other they will care.

โ€œI think this bleedinโ€ poem refers to us.โ€

The others stared at her in surprise.

โ€œWhat makes you think that?โ€ queried Basalt

โ€œIt was, like, when I were watchin’ th’ wolves wi’ Fero. They seemed in lots o’ ways ter be like us, see. Th’ leader was a big, soddin’, reddish brown animal that made me kinda think o’ you, Carthinal, right? There were somethin’ about ‘im that seemed so kinda dangerous, but hey, ‘e didn’t show any behaviour to th’ others that made my feelin’ logical, see? I think it were just that ‘e seemed ter be holdin’ somethin’ inside o’ ‘imself, right? You give me that feelin’ too, Carthinal. An’ that, wi’ ‘is colouring an’ all were what made me, like, think o’ you.

โ€œThen I looked at th’ others. We was all bleedin’ well there. A small black wolf, the alpha female Fero called ‘er, were you, Asphodel. Small and pretty, but wi’ plenty o’ spirit you know. Then there were a damn big, black wolf that were obviously Fero. A little distant, yer know. I noticed that ‘e sometimes wandered off, sniffin’ aroundโ€”fer game I suppose, or danger.

โ€œA small reddish one, much younger than the rest were me, see, while th’ two ‘oo was littermates and was always together was Davrael and Kimi. Th’ male o’ these were black too. Th’ other two were obviously Basalt, a small adult wolf, and a light-coloured female for Randa. The pale wolf were findin’ it hard ter get accepted inter th’ pack, a bit like Randa is wi’ us, like. (Sorry Randa, but it’s true, ain’t it?) Then th’ large black, Fero, showed interest in th’ pale wolf. Don’t look away, Fero. I’ve seen yer eyes on Randa when you think no one’s lookin’.โ€

At this comment, Fero hung his head and Randa frowned and pressed her lips together, but Thadora continued, โ€œSo I wanted ter look at th’ damn poem again, right? Here is ‘ow I sees it. Th’ wolf pack in th’ poem is us. OK? I’ll ignore th’ first verse as I don’t know what that means. Th’ second starts to describe th’ wolves. โ€œThe one whose pride comes with herโ€ is Randa. Hey, you are rather proud an’ ‘aughty yer know, Randa, and th’ “one who slips through every loopโ€ puzzled me at first, but I think it’s me. I seem to allus manage ter get away when some bleedin’ person is on me track for some damn scrape or other.

โ€œNow the โ€œwilful oneโ€ I think is Asphodel, right? You told us you ‘ad to leave ‘Ambara because you’d annoyed the bleedin’ Great Father o’ th’ temple by disobeyin’ orders because yer didn’t agree wi’ them. That’s wilful! And โ€œtrackerโ€ is obviously Fero, OK?โ€ She paused for breath and looked round at them. They were all looking at her with interest.

โ€œโ€œThe leaderโ€ is Carthinal, right?โ€ she continued. โ€œYou seem to ‘ave a ‘idden anger too, Sometimes not so ‘idden, either, Carthinal, so that fits in wi’ โ€œwith his anger held.โ€ โ€œThe ones who hunt the horseโ€ are Davrael and Kimi, though strictly speaking you don’t ‘unt ‘orses, but ‘erd ’em; and finally, Basalt is โ€œthe rock that’s strong.โ€ Basalt is, I think, a rock. Is it strong?

โ€œI’ve not got no further wi’ th’ meanin’ o’ th’ first verse, but th’ last obviously means that we must stick t’gether and be as a wolf pack.โ€

โ€œMaybe,โ€ said Basalt sceptically, โ€œbut it could just be coincidence, couldn’t it?โ€

โ€œI think Thadora is right,โ€ Randa disagreed, surprisingly agreeing with Thadora and earning a sharp look from Basalt, and a murmur of  โ€œOf course. Never do to agree with a dwarf!โ€

โ€œBasalt, don’t be like that,โ€ whispered Kimi. โ€œShe’s a right to voice her own opinion.โ€

The dwarf stopped grumbling and sat scowling to himself instead.

Randa continued, โ€œLook at it this way then. We were unsure as to how many of us there should be. This poem makes that quite clear. There should be eight of us. It makes it clear who should be here.โ€ Here she threw a glance at Carthinal and Basalt who had been reluctant to have her in the group at first. โ€œThose wolves that Thadora and Fero were watching served to jog Thadora’s mind about the poem and to set her thinking. Yes, I agree it refers to us, and someone has put those wolves where we would see them. Everything seems to be happening rather too conveniently for it all to be accidental.โ€

Asphodel had been thinking as well. โ€œThe first verse,โ€ she said slowly, frowning as she spoke, โ€œrefers to the Balance. Some priests believe that in order for the world to work, there must be a balance between good and evil. Just as there is night and day, so we can sleep at night and wake in the daytime refreshed for our daily tasks. We, it seems, must maintain the Balance and to do so, we must cross borders and travel far.โ€

โ€œAnd last verse say we must โ€œWork as one and keep our vow,โ€ and look out for each other. Much like wolf pack. But we have make no vows, do we?โ€ This came from Davrael. โ€œWell, not all to whole group.โ€ He smiled at Kimi as he spoke of vows.

โ€œWell, that can be remedied,โ€ Carthinal spoke for the first time in the discussion. โ€œWe have a representative of the gods here.โ€ He gestured towards Asphodel. โ€œI’m willing to swear to protect you and treat you as the brothers and sisters I never had.โ€

The others agreed, and they all stood in front of Asphodel.

Carthinal thought for a few seconds and then said, โ€œI think I have the words. I will let you decide if they are appropriate before we swear.โ€

When they had heard his thoughts, the others concurred and he said, โ€œI will be as the wolves, and learn from them how to live for the pack. I will put the good of the pack before my own good, and protect the other members to the best of my ability. I will follow my destiny wherever it may lead, and through whatever dangers may befall, serving the pack and the land in all things. This I swear, and may the gods hear my vow.โ€

They all agreed the words were good, and all joined hands and repeated them.

Then Thadora said, impulsively, โ€œWe are Wolf.โ€ and the others repeated her words.

So was born Wolf, from a group of unlikely companions, sworn to each other and to the world.

And a review.

Amanda GRIFFITHS-JONES

4.0 out of 5 stars A Perfectly Set Scene

Reviewed in the United Kingdom on 24 September 2019

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Occasionally I step out of my comfort zone & read a book that takes my into unknown literary territory. This was one of those times. Within a couple of chapters I was drawn into a world of mages, elves & mystical creatures & thoroughly enjoyed the ease with which the author breathed life into her characters. The scene is set perfectly as a quest unfolds, allowing the reader to become absorbed in a fantasy world that holds many surprises. Iโ€™ll definitely be looking out for book two in the series.

If you want to read The Wolf Pack, it is free on Kindle, and also comes as a paperback, hardback and audio book.

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Podcast Episode: Mystery, Poetry, And Fantasy

Pip: Dragons Rule OK โ€” where you can find a CIA spy hiding among monks, a murder at an antique market, and a recipe for sloe gin, sometimes in the same week.

Mara: V.M.Sang covers a lot of ground on this site โ€” fiction reviews across spy thrillers and cozy mysteries, poetry, a Regency novel, fantasy worldbuilding, and a detour into British wildflowers.

Pip: Let's start with the fiction reviews, where the stakes range from international espionage to a dead tennis coach.

Spy Thrillers and Cozy Mysteries

Mara: Two recent reviews land at opposite ends of the crime spectrum โ€” one a high-tension spy thriller, the other a small-town Australian whodunit โ€” and both ask what it costs a person to be seen.

Pip: The thriller is Alone by Anna Michelle Page, and the review pulls no punches on what makes London compelling: "She is a hard woman, made so by her difficult past. She is dangerous, clever and a killer for the CIA."

Mara: That damage is the engine of the whole book. London expects to die on every mission, and the Commander's patient effort to reach her โ€” described as winning the trust of a frightened deer โ€” is what gives the thriller its emotional weight alongside the action. It earns a five-star rating.

Pip: The other review covers Murder in Myrtle Bay by Isabel Blackthorn โ€” cosier territory, a converted factory, a dead tennis coach, and an elderly neighbour who suspects the killer based entirely on her own prejudices. Four stars, and a promise to read the rest of the series.

Mara: From crime scenes to something quieter โ€” poetry that sits with mortality and doesn't flinch.

When Poems Do the Work Prose Can't

Mara: The review of Shadows and Birdsong by Kevin Morris makes a case that poetry about death doesn't have to be morbid โ€” that it can be generous and strange at the same time.

Pip: The collection grew partly from Morris's hospital stay after a brain abscess, and the poems in memory of a lost friend carry that weight. Here is the closing stanza of "Your Shadow," quoted in full: "But other men / May see my shadow / Walking beside them / And know me / And their own mortality."

Mara: What that gets the reader is a poem that turns private grief outward โ€” the dead friend becomes a way of seeing your own end, and somehow that feels like a gift rather than a warning. The review gives it five stars and recommends it even to readers who don't normally read poetry.

Pip: The rhyme schemes are described as unusual, which is doing a lot of heavy lifting as a compliment โ€” but having read that stanza, it lands.

Mara: The second review in this segment covers Isabel by Marina Montrose, a Regency novel that gets three stars. The writing is technically clean, but the review finds the central tension too easily resolved โ€” Francis sheds his mistress without much struggle, and Isabel's arc closely mirrors the protagonist from Montrose's first book. Pleasant, the review says, but not surprising.

Pip: Two very different books, then โ€” one that earns its feeling, one that stays comfortable. From literary territory to somewhere with actual dragons.

Archmages, Prophecies, and Lost Spells

Pip: The fantasy segment pulls back the curtain on the Wolves of Vimar world through an in-character interview โ€” and the history it reveals is darker than the format suggests.

Mara: Archmage Yssalithisandra โ€” Yssa, please โ€” explains the Forbidding: "All books of magic were burned and the mage towers were, for the most part destroyed. All people who could do any magic were put to death too."

Pip: So the mages of the present are essentially archaeologists, rebuilding from nothing after a centuries-long erasure. That reframes what magic means in this world entirely.

Mara: A removed chapter from The Wolf Pack puts flesh on that history โ€” Carthinal and his fellow apprentices discover an ancient spell-book and a loose prophecy that may or may not be centuries old. The worldbuilding carries through consistently between the two posts. There is also a brief pointer to a review of Echo Volume 1 by Kent Wayne, linked for readers who want more fantasy reading.

Pip: From lost spells to something you can actually find in a hedgerow in March.

The Blackthorn in Full Bloom

Mara: The British Wild Flowers series returns with the blackthorn โ€” one of the earliest trees to bloom in spring and, as the post puts it, belonging to the genus Prunus spinosa, making it a relative of the cherry, plum, peach, nectarine, apricot, and almond.

Pip: A family reunion nobody asked for, but the sloe is the troublemaker of the group โ€” too bitter to eat raw, but the post includes a full sloe gin recipe that takes about five months and rewards patience.

Mara: The ecological detail is solid too: dense thorny stems provide nesting cover for birds, the flowers are early nectar for insects, and the tree can live a hundred years. It has also been associated with witchcraft, with wands supposedly made from its wood.


Pip: Damaged spies, dead tennis coaches, a poem about mortality, and a hedgerow shrub with a criminal bite โ€” it's a wide orbit.

Mara: The thread running through it is attention โ€” to characters, to plants, to the lines of a poem that stay with you.

Pip: Next time, we find out what else is growing in the hedgerows. Or who else turns up dead at a market.

From Reader to Writer: My Story

I saw a post on Reddit where the person asked about how we each came about being a writer. I answered, but then thought it might make a post for my blog.

In the beginning, I always loved books and stories for as long as I can remember. When I was very little, long before I could read, maybe about 3 years old, I loved a story called Pink and Ponk. It’s still available on Amazon! I knew it off by heart. One say, I was holding the book and speaking the words, when a friend of my mother saw me and thought I was actually reading!

When I could read for myself, I read a book by Enid Blyton, called Shadow the Sheepdog. I loved that book and reread it many times. It inspired me to write my own story. That was the first story I remember writing. I also devoured many other of her books, as well as books like Black Beauty and Little Women.

Also, when a child I made a little fairy out of grass and made up tales for my little sister about it.

When I was at school, I loved English lessons where we were told to write a story or an essay. I enjoyed both types of writing. I also enjoyed the literature lessons where we read many classic books. It was here that I discovered the Bronte sisters. And unlike many of my compatriots, I also enjoyed poetry.

In my teens I wrote a very bad romance. I only read it to my friends, They were kind about it, but fortunately, it has now disappeared into the mists of time.

After my A levels, I went to do teacher training in Manchester. Here I studied science as a main subject and maths as one of my subsidiaries. As I liked English literature, I chose that as my other subsidiary subject. It was here, at college, that I took to writing some poetry. My first ever published work was a poem I wrote about the atomic bomb. (It was the time of the Cold War, the Aldermaston Marches and CND.) It was published in the magazine of UMIST (University of Manchester Institute of Science and Technology).

During this time, I discovered Lord of the Rings, I was doing a teaching practice at a primary school. A 9 year-old boy asked me if I’d ever read it, and recommended it to me, telling me I should first read The Hobbit. When I found them in the library, I was immediately turned on to fantasy.

Then my writing adventures stopped as I began work, got married and had a family. No time for writing.

My writing started with a Dungeons and Dragons scenario I wrote. I read the Dragonlance Saga and found out it was based on a D&D scenario, and I thought I’d try my hand at converting my scenario to a novel. A standalone was what it was going to be, but in the way these things happen, it’s now up to the 4th book with more to come. The story hasn’t yet finished. (Although the characters think it has!)

Then came the inspiration to write Elemental Worlds, which turned into a duo. It could have been a standalone, but it would have been rather long. I really enjoyed writing that one (or pair, I should say!)

I began writing poetry again at this time.

My daughter had a book when she was little that had a very short story or poem for every day of the year, so I conceived of writing one poem every day for a full year. I did manage to do this, and it’s now published as 2 volumes, January to June and July to December. It has a variety of poems from limericks and haiku to longer narrative poems. Some serious, some amusing.

Another thing that has been fermenting in my head for decades is a saga of a family through the ages. This started when I was in my teens and I was walking with a friend and her family in Derbyshire. We came across a ruined mansion. This picture has been in my head ever since, so I started to write a historical series, now up to Book 2.

I’ve also written 3 novellas; The Wolves of Vimar prequels.

Currently I’m writing Book 3 of the historical series, and hope to soon get on to Book 5 of my fantasy series (The Wolves of Vimar.) I am also working on some short(ish) stories inspired by fairy tales. 2 are already written and 3 is on the way.

And that’s how I became a writer!

If you are interested in any of my books, you can click on the image in the side bar. It will take you to where you can choose your favourite retailer.

Some of these books are also available as audiobooks.

An Interview with Archmage Ysallithisandra from The Wolves of Vimar Series.

I decided to repost some of my earlier blog posts as there are new people who won’t have seen them. Here is the first one.

I apologise for being a day late with the interview with Archmage Yssalithisandra, but she was  extremely busy with some new magic texts that have recently come to light and put the interview off for a day.

Me: Good morning, Archmage Yssalithisandra. I am glad you decided to meet me and answer afew questions that our readers would like toknow about.

Yssa: Please call me Yssa. Everyone does, you know. It is a pleasure to be interviewed by you.

Me: How is it that an elf is working in Hambara and not in Rindisillaron, the elven homeland?

Yssa: I came here because of the Mage Tower. There is no longer one in Rindissillaron, you know.

Me: I believe there was one once though. Why has it not been found or rebuilt?

Yssa: Mage towers are always built on special places where the mana is at its strongest. Places where it wells up rather like springs out of the ground. The whereabouts of the Mage Tower in Rindisillaron has long been forgotten, as is the case of the towers in most places in Khalram.

Me: Why has this occurred?

Yssa: It was after the Forbidding when they were deserted for several hundred years.

Me: The Forbidding?

Yssa: Yes. Two hundred or so years after the death of Sauvern, there was an uprising by a group of mages who thought that because they could weave the mana, they were superior to others and that they should be the rulers of all the lands in Khalram. There was another group who opposed them, of course and the result was a terrible war. The results were so devastating that when the rightful rulers were restored, the practice of magic was forbidden throughout the lands that make up Khalram. All books of magic were burned and the mage towers were, for the most part destroyed. All people who could do any magic were put to death too.

Me: So that is why you are researching  the past. To find the lost spells. How long ago did the Forbidding occur?

Yssa: How long? Well it began about 600 years ago and lasted for about 3oo years. That means that it ended about 300 years ago.

Me: And in 300 years you still haven’t found all that was lost?

Yssa: Remember; there were no mages in the continent when it ended, nor any books. We had to start again from scratch.

Me: How is your work coming on?

Yssa: Oh, we’re beginning to make more progress and we keep finding books that had been hidden away by mages when they thought they would be executed. One such is the one Mabryl found and Carthinal brought to Hambara.

Me: Do you think that the mage towers will ever be re-built?

Yssa: That depends on whether or not we can find where the nodes were that they were built on. In the past there were said to have been mages who were able to detect these places, but we know of none at the moment. There are a few mages who can weave the mana without recourse to arcane language and hand gestures, but use just the power of thought, and it  is possible that some of these could do so as they are much more sensitive to magic. We have yet to find any though, so at the moment it’s just a hypothesis.

Me: You met Carthinal when he came to take his tests. What did you think of him?

Yssa: (blushing slightly) He is a very charismatic young man. He is also a very talented mage. I oversaw his practical test, as you probably know, and was most impressed.

Me: Is it true that you had a relationship with him while he was in Hasmbara?

Yssa: (looking down at her hands.) Yes. It was brief, and then he left to do the job that the Duke set him. I don’t know when he’ll be back, but I don’t expect him to want to continue with me.

Me: Do you think you will ever go back to Rindissillaron?

Yssa: Probably not. I do go to visit my parents as often as I can. Mother says it’s not often enough of course. She misses me, I think. I have no brothers and sisters, so I’m her little lost lamb. She means well, but she does fuss.

Me: Thank you for giving up your precious time, Archmage.

Yssa: Yssa!

Me: Sorry, Yssa. I am sure our readers will be interested in the history that you have told us about, and good luck with the research.

Yssa: Thank you. It was a pleasure talking to you. Grillon’s blessings on your readers.

Carthinal met Yssa when he went to the Mage Tower in Hambara to complete his apprenticeship as a mage. They had a brief affair before Carthinal went on the quest to find Sauvern’s Sword.

Later Yssa became more important in Carthinal’s life and appears in several of the books in the series.

If you would like to know more about Yssa and Carthinal, you can read about them in The Wolf Pack, Book 1 of The Wolves of Vimar series.

The ebook version ofThe Wolf Pack is free.

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There are also some prequels where you can find out a bit more about the characters in the books.

A Chapter Removed from The Wolf Pack.

The half-elf leafed through the book he was studying. He was due to take the tests to end his apprenticeship soon. He was a tall, handsome young man, just over six feet with shoulder-length auburn hair, a closely trimmed beard and eyes of an intense deep blue. 

He sat in the study at the home of Mabryl in Bluehaven, which was situated on the south coast of the land of Grosmer. With him were Mabrylโ€™s other two apprentices, fourteen year old Tomac and sixteen year old Emmienne. 

Tomac pushed a lock of his unruly dark hair out of his eyes. โ€˜I think thatโ€™s the Master coming in now, Carthinal. Youโ€™d better get looking as though youโ€™ve been doing something instead of moping around waiting for that letter, or youโ€™ll be in trouble.โ€™

Mabryl, his master and adopted father had sent off to the Mage Tower in Hambara asking for the young man to be considered for the tests at the next opportunity.

As Tomac spoke, the door opened and Mabryl entered, shaking his cloak as he did so. โ€˜Itโ€™s pretty cold out there, and it’s turning to snow if Iโ€™m not mistaken. Unusual this far south.โ€™ He turned to his three apprentices. โ€˜Have you finished the tasks I set you?โ€™ He hung his cloak on a stand by the door. 

Carthinal stood and ambled to the fire, putting a fresh log on to the flames. โ€˜Come and get warm, and, no Iโ€™ve not finished. I canโ€™t settle to anything until I hear about whether I can take the tests soon. I think Emmienne has finished though. I canโ€™t say about Tomac.’

โ€˜Nearly,โ€™ replied Tomac, jumping from his chair and carrying his workbook to his master. โ€˜I was a little stuck on the moon phases, though.โ€™ He ran his fingers through his hair. โ€˜Itโ€™s complicated trying to work out both moons at the same time.โ€™

โ€˜Stick to it, youngster,โ€™ said Emmienne from the window seat. She grinned across at the younger boy, the grin lighting up her otherwise plain face. โ€˜I had problems too, but it comes eventually.โ€™

Tomac groaned and went back to his seat.

โ€˜Iโ€™ve finished though, Sir,โ€™ she said. โ€˜Iโ€™ve learned that new spell you gave me and am sure I can make it work. When can I try it?โ€™

Mabryl laughed. โ€˜Such enthusiasm. Weโ€™ll try it tomorrow, I think. In the meantime, Iโ€™ve made what I think may be a big discovery. Perhaps the most important one for many, many years. Look.โ€™ He put an ancient-looking book on the table. It had a red leather cover that sported a few cracks and scratches. On the front, in what had once been gold lettering, was the name Armron Filibur.  

The three apprentices gathered round.  

โ€˜I think it may be a spell book from before the Forbidding,โ€™ Mabryl said 

Emmienne gasped. โ€˜That is old. And if it is, we’ll be able to find lost spells. Youโ€™ll be famous, Sir.โ€™

โ€˜Calm down, Emm. It may not be the spell-book of a magister, or even an arch-mage.โ€™ Cardinal smiled at the girl . โ€˜It may only have the spells we already know and not any of the lost ones.โ€™

Around seven hundred and fifty years previously there had been a war between conflicting mages. It caused such devastation and hardship that, when it had ended, the king forbade the use of magic on pain of death. He ordered all spell books to be burned. 

Some mages, however, hid some of their books and these came to light occasionally. 

During this time, much knowledge was lost and now mages worked to try to re-discover the lost spells. If this book were to be of use, it would need to be taken to one of these mages.

The door opened and Lillora, Mabrylโ€™s housekeeper entered. โ€˜Sorry to disturb you, sir, but a bird arrived a few minutes ago. I thought you should know.โ€™ She glanced towards Carthinal and grinned, a twinkle in her eye. โ€˜Probably nothing important though.โ€™

โ€˜Iโ€™ll come and look,โ€™ Mabryl stood and left the three apprentices to their own devices.

Carthinal picked up the book and leafed through it. He could understand little of what was written there. Firstly it was in an archaic script and language and secondly he was as yet only an apprentice and had not acquired the knowledge to understand more than a limited number of spells. 

He frowned as he tried to read the words on the page. As he lifted the book from the table to take it nearer to the light, a loose page fell onto the floor. He stooped to pick it up and realised he could read it, unlike the rest of the book, and that it was not a page fallen out, but a note that had been inserted there. He took it to the window seat and sat by Emmienne to read it.

โ€˜Whatโ€™s that?โ€™ The brown-haired girl strained to read it upside down.

โ€˜Iโ€™m not sure.โ€™ Carthinal wrinkled his brow. โ€˜It fell out of the book Mabryl bought, but itโ€™s not the same writing, nor is it in the same archaic script. Itโ€™s a note of some kind.โ€™ He paused to read it.

As he read the note, Mabryl came back holding a piece of paper in his hand.

โ€˜Itโ€™s good news, Carthinal,โ€™ he told the young man. โ€˜Thereโ€™s a space for you to take your tests in the next batch, which take place just before Grillon’s Day. As thatโ€™s in about five sixdays weโ€™ll need to leave here soon to allow us time to settle in before your ordeal. Whatโ€™s that youโ€™ve got there?โ€™ He strode to the window seat and looked at the paper in Carthinalโ€™s hand.

โ€˜It fell out of the book you bought,โ€™ Cardinal replied . โ€˜It doesnโ€™t seem to be by the author of the book though. Itโ€™s in a more modern script that I can read. It doesnโ€™t make much sense though.โ€™ He handed it to Mabryl who read it, then reread it, this time out loud.

โ€˜โ€œWhen Kalhera descends from the mountains, and orcs once more roam the land,

When impossible beasts occur and the Never-Dying man is once more at hand.

Then the Sword that was lost must once more be found; only it can destroy the threat

And kill the immortal mortal to balance out his debt.โ€

โ€˜It does seem a strange thing to write,โ€™  Tomac said, โ€˜and it doesnโ€™t make a lot of sense either. How can Kalhera descend from the mountains? Sheโ€™s a god and the gods donโ€™t come down to Vimar.โ€™ 

Mabryl turned the page in his hand and saw some more writing on the back. 

โ€˜This says itโ€™s a quotation from something the writer heard and wrote down. The author says he visited the Oracle on Holy Island and this was what he was told the Oracle said earlier in the day to no one in particular. Only the attendants were present.โ€™ 

He replaced the paper in the book on the table and turned to Carthinal. โ€˜We must take this to a colleague of mine in the Mage Tower when we go. Sheโ€™s working on finding the old spells, I believe, and this may be of use to her. The loose note may be a prophecy if it came from the Oracle, but who knows when it was made? It could be that it was centuries ago, or yesterday; and it could be referring to a time well in the future or even in the past. I think we should ignore it for now. Lillora told me our lunch is almost ready, so I suggest we go to the table before she gets mad.โ€™

The three apprentices forgot all about the book and the note as they enjoyed the housekeeperโ€™s excellent cooking and after the meal they returned to their studies. 

Mabryl gave them all tasks to complete and went out again, taking the book with him.

<<>>

Duke Danu of Bluehaven had trained at the Mage Tower in his youth. He had some talent for magic, but with the death of his elder brother in an epidemic, he had to take over the duties and prepared to become the duke one day. He had never taken the tests to end his apprenticeship, but he retained an interest in magic and still practiced it in a small way. โ€˜To keep my hand in,โ€™ he told people. 

Today he sat in his study going over the accounts of the duchy when a knock came at the door.

โ€˜Arch-mage Mabryl to see you, sir,โ€™  his butler said.

โ€˜Send him in.โ€™ Danu rose from his seat and clasped Mabryl in a hug. โ€˜You’ve not been to visit in some while, my friend,โ€™ he scolded. โ€˜Busy with your three apprentices, I suppose.โ€™

Mabryl smiled at his friend. โ€˜Yes, they keep me busy. Carthinalโ€™s ready to take his tests and become a full mage now.โ€™

โ€˜Is that so?โ€™ Duke Danu raised an eyebrow. โ€˜Doesn’t time fly? Hardly seems any time at all when you took that scruffy little urchin off the streets. Everyone thought you were mad, you knowโ€“taking a street child to be your apprentic, then adopting him? Well, we were wrong. Heโ€™s turning out all right.โ€™

โ€˜Considering his background, yes. He still has his faults and I canโ€™t say there werenโ€™t times when I agreed with you Iโ€™d done the wrong thing. He still needs to control his temper better and his good looks donโ€™t help him to control his baser instincts. Girls, and older women too, flirt outrageously with him, and he enjoys it a little too much! But I didn’t come here to talk about Carthinal. Iโ€™ve made a discovery and I want your opinion.โ€™

 He pulled the spell-book out of a bag at his side. โ€˜Iโ€™m going to take this to Yssa at the Mage Tower when I take Carthinal. Sheโ€™ll be the best to decide how important it is.โ€™ He handed the book to Danu.

The duke whistled. โ€˜This is important, Mabryl. I canโ€™t read it, but it certainly looks like a spell-book to me. Itโ€™s old and could easily date to before the Forbidding.โ€™ He picked up the note that was still between its pages. โ€˜Whatโ€™s this?โ€™ 

โ€˜A little note that was in the book. Carthinal found it. It doesnโ€™t seem to belong to the book though, and Iโ€™ve thought it could be a hoax; someone putting a seeming prophecy in an important old book.โ€™

โ€˜Maybe, but I donโ€™t think so. Some research Iโ€™ve been doing suggests that Grosmer is about to face some danger. This may be a prophecy about that. I would suggest you take it to Rollo in Hambara when you go. His libraryโ€™s much more extensive than mine and he can find out more. Iโ€™ve been in touch with him about this possible danger so he knows a little of what I suspect.โ€™

โ€˜I donโ€™t know Duke Rollo,โ€™ Mabryl replied. โ€˜He may not believe me. Iโ€™ve heard heโ€™s a suspicious man. I think there is a possibility this note is a hoax even if you donโ€™t. I’ll need to prove that I’ve come from you.โ€™

โ€˜I’ll write you a letter to give to him.โ€™ Danu ambled to his desk and lifted his pen. โ€˜Iโ€™ll also give you this.โ€™ He picked up a small statuette of a trotting horse, about three inches long and two high that sat on his desk. โ€˜Itโ€™s one of a pair we found in our adventuring days. He has the other. Heโ€™ll know Iโ€™ve sent you when he sees that, especially if you ask him about the other one. Now, go and sit by the fire and Iโ€™ll get some wine for us to drink while we talk about other things.โ€™

The two old friends spent the afternoon remembering past times and gossiping about the goings on in the city of Bluehaven as the afternoon passed into evening and the dukeโ€™s work lay unfinished on the desk.

If you would like to find out more about this prophecy and what it means, click on the book title in the sidebar.

(This was supposed to be scheduled for next Tuesday, but WordPress, in its wisdom, has decided I should post it now! So this is next week’s post early.)

Review of Catling’s Bane by D. Wallace Peach

Overview.

I thoroughly enjoyed this book. It’s the first of a series, and I’m looking forward to reading the others. A wonderful story, well told.

Blurb

Catling โ€“ Sheโ€™s a weapon desired by those who reign and those who rebel.

In the tiered cities of Ellegeance, the elite Influencersโ€™ Guild holds the power to manipulate emotions. Love and fear, pleasure and pain mark the extremes of their sway. But itโ€™s the subtle blends that hook their victimsโ€™ hearts. They hide behind oaths of loyalty and rule the world.

Until Catling discovers the gift that will be her bane. She is the shield that disrupts the influencerโ€™s sway.

Born in the grim warrens beneath the city, Catling rues the rose birthmark encircling her eye. Yet, it grants her a unique ability, the means to remake a civilization. To the Guild, she an aberration, a threat, and they order her death. No longer a helpless child, Catling has other plans.

As chaos shakes the foundations of order and rule, will she become the realmโ€™s savior? Or its executioner?

Welcome to a world of three moons, a sentient landscape, rivers of light, and tier cities that rise from the swamps like otherworld flowers. A planet of waterdragons, where humans are the aliens living among three-fingered natives with spotted skin. Where a half-blood converses with the fog and the goddess plans her final reckoning.

In the spirit of the fantasy tradition set by Patrick Rothfuss, Karen Miller, and Glenda Larke, follow Catlingโ€™s journey as she grows into the deadly force that shapes the future. She is the realmโ€™s shield, an influencer, assassin, healer, mother, and avenger. And all she desires is to go home.

Story

Catling is first met as a child of around two years. She has a birthmark over her right eye, and her mother tries to scrub it off. 

She has been born into the poor, who scrape a living under a large tiered city. The richer a person is, the higher in the tiers they live, culminating in the High Ward’s place of residence.

High Ward Algar holds onto his position by means of regular hangings and the use of โ€˜influencersโ€™ who can manipulate the emotions of the people. These influencers make people enjoy the hangings, and even influence those being hanged to be happy about it.

Catling discovers she can block the influencers. It has something to do with her birthmarked eye. She has the sense to keep it a secret, though. 

Her mother thinks she can improve her lot without a child, and when Catling is six, she sells her.

The man who buys the child has a large family, and is kind, so Catling enjoys her life there.

Then things begin to change. Her idyllic life is shattered.

I won’t say any more because of spoilers.

Characters

Ms Wallace Peach has given us a wealth of interesting characters. Each one is an individual, with their own quirks. 

I liked the way Ms Wallace Peach dealt with Catling growing up. She was confused, afraid, loving, all the things a young girl would feel. But her special talent made her want to remain hidden. It would be extremely dangerous for it to be discovered that she could block the influencers.

There are a lot of individuals in this book, and I’m not going to pick any out.

Writing.

I find Diana Wallace Peach’s writing beautiful. She spins a wonderful tale, and draws the reader into the story. 

The atmospheres she creates in the different parts of the book seem real. The abject poverty of the people at the beginning of the book; the richness of the higher tiers; the love Catling found on the farm; the river and its dangerous denizens; the swamp people; all are shown so we feel we are part of those communities.

The grammar is good–no, excellent, and there are few typos.

I give it 5*.

 My ranking of books.

In order to get a particular number of stars, it is not necessary to meet all the criteria. This is a guide only.

5* Exceptional. Wonderful story. Setting well drawn, and characters believableโ€“not perfect, but with flaws. Will keep you up all night. No typos or grammatical errors.

4* A thoroughly enjoyable read. Great and original story. Believable setting and characters. Very few grammatical errors or typos.

3* I enjoyed it. Good story. Characters need some development. Some typos or grammatical errors.

2* Not for me. Story not very strong. Unbelievable and flat characters. Setting not clearly defined. Many typos or grammatical errors.

1* I hated it. Story almost non-existent. Setting poor. Possibly couldn’t finish it.

A Post from Connie Jasperson’s blog.

I thought this post well worth sharing.

Immortal’s Death has Arrived

I’ve now been informed that Immortal’s Death is available on multiple platforms. The links are below.

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A royal wedding. A missing duke. An empire on the brink of war.

Carthinal and his companions gather to celebrate Princess Randaโ€™s wedding to Prince Almoroโ€”until news arrives that Duke Larrin of Sendolina and his wife are missing, and their lands have fallen to enemy forces. With tension rising between Grosmer and Erian, the king dispatches a dragonet to uncover the truth.

As the Wolf mercenaries set out on a dangerous rescue mission, they are blown off course and forced into battles on land and sea. Meanwhile, rebellion brews in Hambara, and young Thadoraโ€”noble by blood but raised in the shadowsโ€”must uncover Erianโ€™s next move.

Soon, loyalties will be tested, lives lost, and Carthinal will have to face a betrayal from someone he trusted the most.

A richly detailed epic fantasy adventure, IMMORTAL’S DEATH is the fourth book in the Wolves of Vimar series by V.M. Sang.

The first 3 books are available as a Collection. It says ‘The Complete Series’, but that was before Book 4 was published.

The Wolves of Vimar Collection: The Complete Series

The Wolves of Vimar Collection: The Complete Series

by V.M. Sang  | 18 Dec 2023

Kindle Edition ยฃ3.99

Paperback ยฃ21.99

Hardcover ยฃ37 54

All three books in V.M. Sang’s ‘The Wolves Of Vimar’ series of fantasy novels, now available in one volume!

The Wolf Pack: Carthinal is ready for his rite of passage to become a mage. What he doesn’t expect is ending up on a quest to find the long-lost sword of the legendary King Sauvern. Followed by Randa, the daughter of the Duke of Hambara, and the young thief Thad, Carthinal will need all the help he can get in order to complete his quest.

The Never-Dying Man: After straying into Erian, Carthinal and his friends find preparations for war. Carthinal will need to face unpleasant truths about himself; Is his desire to further his magical career more important than his friends, and his country?

Wolf Moon: An invasion is planned to Grosmer. As the heroes make their escape, they accidentally stumble upon an old Dwarven city. Facing enemies on all sides, the five must find where their loyalties lie, But can they save their homeland from certain destruction?


Although it is better to read the whole series, I believe that each book can be read on its own. There are some things that hang over, as it’s a series, but most things are settled in each book. There is an overarching quest of finding and killing the Never-Dying Man to save the land of Grosmer.

If you choose to read any or all of the books, I would be more than grateful for an honest review, and if you would like a free review copy of Immortal’s Death (or any of the other books), please let me know in the comments.

There is no obligation to review, but I would be greatly appreciative.

Interview with Sandron from The Wolves of Vimar Series.

I’ve been told that the release of Book 4 is imminent.

I invited Sandron, brother to Duke Larrin of Sendolina, to come and have a chat. He eagerly agreed.

Image: young man with a dragonet on his shoulder sitting in a castle room .
Image generated by Vivienne Sang using Bing AI Generator

Hi, Sandron. It’s good of you to agree to join me.

Sandron: Thank you for asking me.

Me: I understand you are the youngest of three. What was it like, growing up with two older brothers?

Sandron: Well, I’d have preferred being the second. Not the eldest, though.

Me: Why was that? The eldest would become the Duke of Sendolina. Wouldn’t you have liked that?

Sandron: *Shakes his head.* Nah! Not for me. Too much work. But it suits Larrin perfectly. He was much more serious than either Brand or myself.

Me: Brand is your other brother–the middle one of the three of you?

Sandron: Was. Brand is no longer with us. He was murdered by that fellow, Hammevaro, at a banquet. He’d come to Grosmer as Erian’s ambassador and poisoned the wine for the top table. That included all the dukes, Crown Prince Perdillon and his wife, Princess Helloria, King Gerim and Queen Carolla and Princess Dara.
Sadly, King Gerim died, along with several dukes. Princess Helloria had just gone into labour with Prince Gerim and so she and Perdillon had left, and Prince Almoro was sulking over Randa, so remained in his room.
Brand was one who succumbed, too. *Wipes his hand over his face.*

Me: Why did Hammevaro do this?

Sandron: In order to try to remove all experienced leaders to make Erian’s invasion easier. *Thumps the table.*

Me: You miss Brand.

Sandron: Yes. I miss him every day. *sighs* We had such fun, especially when Randa came to live with us. Her father sent her to share our tutor. *grins*. We called him Snagtooth. His real name was Professor Snaggletuf, as he had very uneven teeth the nickname fit.

Me: Larrin became Duke of Sendolina. What did Brand and you do?

Sandron: Brand joined the army. It suited him, and I’ve no doubt he’d have made it to the highest level. Second sons went into the army. Third sons, *pauses for a second* usually joined one of the temples and became priests. That wasn’t the life for me. I honour the gods, of course, but don’t have a preference.

Me: Why didn’t you join the army?

Sandron: No good at following orders. I’d have questioned them if I thought I had a better idea. Not a good trait in a soldier!

Me: So what did you do?

Sandron: *He broke into laughter.* I became the leader of a bandit gang. No one knew until we captured Wolf on their way back from finding Sauvern’s Sword and Randa recognised me. She then gave me the idea of becoming legit and forming a mercenary troop.

Me: You have a much bigger part to play in this current part of the story. Are you pleased about that?

Sandron: Yes… and no. It doesn’t always show me in the best light. But I was pleased to help my country.

Me: Thank you for coming to Dragons Rule OK.

Sandron: It was a pleasure. Thank you for inviting me.

I’m really looking forward to the release of this book. I enjoyed writing it immensely. It took a long time, but very shortly it’ll be released into the wild.

If you’ve not read the other books in the series, it begins with The Wolf Pack, goes on to Wolf Moon and The NeverDying Man, and now Immortal’s Death.

It all begins with a prophecy found in an ancient book.

When Kalhera descends from the mountains
And orcs once more roam the land:
When impossible beasts occur
And the Never-Dying Man is once more at hand,
Then the Sword that was lost must once more be found.
Only it can destroy the threat
And kill the Immortal Mortal
To balance out his debt.

A newly-promoted mage, a priestess in disgrace, an outcast ranger, an aristocratic young lady. These come together along with others, to try to find Sauvern’s Sword–a mythical, magic sword lost for hundreds of years.

Their quest leads them to near death, rescue by strange creatures, a visit to foreign lands, capture and escape.

Can they succeed in finding the Sword, in order to save the land of Grosmer from peril?

You can get the books by clicking on the cover in the sidebar.

If you have anyone who likes Epic Fantasy in your family, these would make excellent Christmas presents.

And here’s a review.

D. W. Peach

4.0 out of 5 stars Plot-driven high fantasy quest

Reviewed in the United States on 12 March 2024

Format: Kindle EditionVerified Purchase

The first book in the Wolves of Vimar series opens with the burial of a king and his magical sword, and the sacrifice of twelve warriors whose spirits will protect his body from harm until the eight โ€œwolvesโ€ come. This prophecy results, many years later, in a quest, as eight characters are sent by a duke to bring back the sword.

The book is divided into thirds. Part I takes its time introducing the characters who represent a variety of races including humans, elves, dwarves, and their half-elf leader, Carthinal. The group includes the dukeโ€™s entitled daughter Randa, a married horselord couple, and a young thief with a thick accent. The backstory for most of the characters comes through multiple points of view with some omnipresent narration.

Part II of the story begins the journey. The authorโ€™s attention to world-building is evident as the โ€œwolf packโ€ wends their way across the land. Part III covers the journey home. The pace is moderate throughout with tangents for fun, humor, and a bit of romance. Much of the bookโ€™s journeying reminded me of a Dungeons and Dragons quest, with a variety of creatures offering challenges along the way including Yetis, dragons, nymphs, bandits, hobgoblins, and other fantasy monsters.

The characters are distinct but for me, the book was more of a plot-driven read than an emotionally-deep character-driven one. Most of the characters donโ€™t have significant arcs apart from Randa, the entitled dukeโ€™s daughter, and for that reason, I found her the most interesting. Though the first book in the series, it also stands alone well. Recommended to YA readers of high-fantasy quests who enjoy a leisurely pace, plot-driven stories, and encounters with otherworldly creatures and monsters.

Exclusive Preview of Immortal’s Death Cover and Story

I’ve gone through the edited manuscript and returned it, now I’ve received the layout manuscripts, which I’ve just checked.

Things are progressing nicely. I am still hoping for a before Christmas release.

Anyway, I thought you’d like a preview of the cover, so here it is.

In this book, the group known as Wolf finally get to use the Sword of Sauvern on the man threatening their country. So that’s the end of the story–or is it?

Here’s the blurb.

A royal wedding. A missing duke. An empire on the brink of war.

Carthinal and his companions gather to celebrate Princess Randaโ€™s wedding to Prince Almoroโ€”until news arrives that Duke Larrin of Sendolina and his wife are missing, and their lands have fallen to enemy forces. With tension rising between Grosmer and Erian, the king dispatches a dragonet to uncover the truth.

As the Wolf mercenaries set out on a dangerous rescue mission, they are blown off course and forced into battles on land and sea. Meanwhile, rebellion brews in Hambara, and young Thadoraโ€”noble by blood but raised in the shadowsโ€”must uncover Erianโ€™s next move.

Soon, loyalties will be tested, lives lost, and Carthinal will have to face a betrayal from someone he trusted the most.

A richly detailed epic fantasy adventure, IMMORTAL’S DEATH is the fourth book in the Wolves of Vimar series by V.M. Sang.

I’ll keep you updated on what’s happening with it, and when it’ll finally be out.

It will be possible, I think, to read this without having read the others, although it would be better read as part of the series.

If anyone would like a free early copy to read (and review when it’s published) I can send a pdf.

Do you like the cover? Let me know what you think.