Podcast Episode: Mystery, Poetry, And Fantasy

Pip: Dragons Rule OK โ€” where you can find a CIA spy hiding among monks, a murder at an antique market, and a recipe for sloe gin, sometimes in the same week.

Mara: V.M.Sang covers a lot of ground on this site โ€” fiction reviews across spy thrillers and cozy mysteries, poetry, a Regency novel, fantasy worldbuilding, and a detour into British wildflowers.

Pip: Let's start with the fiction reviews, where the stakes range from international espionage to a dead tennis coach.

Spy Thrillers and Cozy Mysteries

Mara: Two recent reviews land at opposite ends of the crime spectrum โ€” one a high-tension spy thriller, the other a small-town Australian whodunit โ€” and both ask what it costs a person to be seen.

Pip: The thriller is Alone by Anna Michelle Page, and the review pulls no punches on what makes London compelling: "She is a hard woman, made so by her difficult past. She is dangerous, clever and a killer for the CIA."

Mara: That damage is the engine of the whole book. London expects to die on every mission, and the Commander's patient effort to reach her โ€” described as winning the trust of a frightened deer โ€” is what gives the thriller its emotional weight alongside the action. It earns a five-star rating.

Pip: The other review covers Murder in Myrtle Bay by Isabel Blackthorn โ€” cosier territory, a converted factory, a dead tennis coach, and an elderly neighbour who suspects the killer based entirely on her own prejudices. Four stars, and a promise to read the rest of the series.

Mara: From crime scenes to something quieter โ€” poetry that sits with mortality and doesn't flinch.

When Poems Do the Work Prose Can't

Mara: The review of Shadows and Birdsong by Kevin Morris makes a case that poetry about death doesn't have to be morbid โ€” that it can be generous and strange at the same time.

Pip: The collection grew partly from Morris's hospital stay after a brain abscess, and the poems in memory of a lost friend carry that weight. Here is the closing stanza of "Your Shadow," quoted in full: "But other men / May see my shadow / Walking beside them / And know me / And their own mortality."

Mara: What that gets the reader is a poem that turns private grief outward โ€” the dead friend becomes a way of seeing your own end, and somehow that feels like a gift rather than a warning. The review gives it five stars and recommends it even to readers who don't normally read poetry.

Pip: The rhyme schemes are described as unusual, which is doing a lot of heavy lifting as a compliment โ€” but having read that stanza, it lands.

Mara: The second review in this segment covers Isabel by Marina Montrose, a Regency novel that gets three stars. The writing is technically clean, but the review finds the central tension too easily resolved โ€” Francis sheds his mistress without much struggle, and Isabel's arc closely mirrors the protagonist from Montrose's first book. Pleasant, the review says, but not surprising.

Pip: Two very different books, then โ€” one that earns its feeling, one that stays comfortable. From literary territory to somewhere with actual dragons.

Archmages, Prophecies, and Lost Spells

Pip: The fantasy segment pulls back the curtain on the Wolves of Vimar world through an in-character interview โ€” and the history it reveals is darker than the format suggests.

Mara: Archmage Yssalithisandra โ€” Yssa, please โ€” explains the Forbidding: "All books of magic were burned and the mage towers were, for the most part destroyed. All people who could do any magic were put to death too."

Pip: So the mages of the present are essentially archaeologists, rebuilding from nothing after a centuries-long erasure. That reframes what magic means in this world entirely.

Mara: A removed chapter from The Wolf Pack puts flesh on that history โ€” Carthinal and his fellow apprentices discover an ancient spell-book and a loose prophecy that may or may not be centuries old. The worldbuilding carries through consistently between the two posts. There is also a brief pointer to a review of Echo Volume 1 by Kent Wayne, linked for readers who want more fantasy reading.

Pip: From lost spells to something you can actually find in a hedgerow in March.

The Blackthorn in Full Bloom

Mara: The British Wild Flowers series returns with the blackthorn โ€” one of the earliest trees to bloom in spring and, as the post puts it, belonging to the genus Prunus spinosa, making it a relative of the cherry, plum, peach, nectarine, apricot, and almond.

Pip: A family reunion nobody asked for, but the sloe is the troublemaker of the group โ€” too bitter to eat raw, but the post includes a full sloe gin recipe that takes about five months and rewards patience.

Mara: The ecological detail is solid too: dense thorny stems provide nesting cover for birds, the flowers are early nectar for insects, and the tree can live a hundred years. It has also been associated with witchcraft, with wands supposedly made from its wood.


Pip: Damaged spies, dead tennis coaches, a poem about mortality, and a hedgerow shrub with a criminal bite โ€” it's a wide orbit.

Mara: The thread running through it is attention โ€” to characters, to plants, to the lines of a poem that stay with you.

Pip: Next time, we find out what else is growing in the hedgerows. Or who else turns up dead at a market.

Review of Murder in Myrtle Bay by Isabel Blackthorn

Overview

This is a cosy mystery set in the south of the Australian continent, where the cold southern wind blows from  Antarctica. 

Blurb

When feature writer Ruth Finlay and her elderly neighbor Doris Cleaver visit an antique and collectibles market in the small town of Myrtle Bay, they get a lot more than they bargained for.

After Ruth’s old tennis coach is found dead, they discover that there’s no lack of people who harbor a grudge against the victim, and a tangled web of family ties and lies begins to unravel. But can Ruth and Doris find the killer in time to avert a second murder?

A quirky feel-good mystery laced with intrigue, Murder in Myrtle Bay is the first book in Isobel Blackthorn’s ‘Ruth Finlay Mysteries’ series. Set in small town Australia, it is a sure pick for any fan of classic whodunits and cozy mysteries!

Story

Ruth Finlay goes shopping with her neighbour and friend, Doris, in a converted factory. She finds her old tennis coach lying on the floor, having been hit on the head. His last words were,โ€˜I didn’t do it.โ€™

But what was it he didn’t do?

Ruth is intrigued and, along with Doris, decides to start her own investigation, having admired  the victim throughout her life.

Of course, things are not straightforward.  It transpires that the victim isn’t the man Ruth thought he was, and there are many who hold a grudge against him.

Characters

Ruth is a writer for a magazine. She is currently researching for an article on the old factory. A sensible woman, Ruth keeps herself fit by going on a daily run. It is on one of these runs that she spots some suspicious activity. Her natural curiosity is what makes her decide to investigate the murder.

Doris is a favourite character of mine. She is an elderly lady who seems to think she is still a hippie from the 70s. She dresses in an eccentric style.

She joins Ruth with enthusiasm and thinks she knows who the murderer is based on nothing more than her own prejudices. She is also very stubborn.

There are many other characters in the book, of course, but I really can’t pick any out without mentioning all of them, which isn’t practical. Suffice it to say that they are all believable.

Writing

Fairly near the beginning, there is a description of the relationships between some of the families in the story. I found this somewhat confusing, and I don’t think it was necessary; at least not until we got to know the characters. There were other places, too, where information was given that wasn’t needed.

On the whole the writing is good with no typos, but there are a few grammatical errors. For example, Ms Blackthorn says, โ€˜Doris and Iโ€™ on occasions where it should be โ€˜Doris and me,โ€™ and she mentions โ€˜French provisional cuisineโ€™, when it should be โ€˜French Provenรงal cuisineโ€™.

But these are few and far between, and didn’t distract me too much from the story.

I GIVE IT 4*

My ranking of books.

In order to get a particular number of stars, it is not necessary to meet all the criteria. This is a guide only.

5* Exceptional. Wonderful story. Setting well drawn, and characters believableโ€“not perfect, but with flaws. Will keep you up all night. No typos or grammatical errors.

4* A thoroughly enjoyable read. Great and original story. Believable setting and characters. Very few grammatical errors or typos.

3* I enjoyed it. Good story. Characters need some development. Some typos or grammatical errors.

2* Not for me. Story not very strong. Unbelievable and flat characters. Setting not clearly defined. Many typos or grammatical errors.

1* I hated it. Story almost non-existent. Setting poor. Possibly couldn’t finish it.

I’ve not read any other books in this series, but I will definitely be doing so.

Have you read any of Isabel’s books?

How Iโ€™m Using WordPress AI to Improve My Site Content

I’ve been using WordPress’ AI to improve my site.

I don’t think this is cheating as I couldn’t do it on my own. It’s not like writing a book or story using it.

Anyway, so far I’ve done Meet Vivienne (was About Me) and My Fantasy Novels.

I’d like you to take a quick look and see what you think. I think it’s a great improvement. Thank you AI.

Festival of the Arts

Every September Hailsham, in EastcSussex, has 2 weeks dedicated to the Arts.

There is something for everyone. The Downland Poets hold a poetry reading, with an open mic, a local Townswomen’s Guild puts on a play. There is music in the church and other venues, workshops in painting, glass work and other things. Comedy is also included.

There is street drama, a talk on the history of Punch and Judy, and the magic of pantomime, as well as a performance by the Ukrainian Choir and Dancers.

Children aren’t left out, either. There are puppet shows and workshops for them, too, as well as stories. And a writing competition.

There is also a short story competition for adults, and a ‘Meet the Author’ session. No, I’ve not been invited to take part in that! ๐Ÿ˜•

Near the beginnjng of this festival, artists were invited to enter artwofk to be disp.ayed in shop windows. I had some of my paintings exhibited in that.

On one of the bridges, more recently, artists has been exhibited on a bridge over a disused railway line, now a footpath.

During the pandemic, the organisers put artwork online in a virtual art gallery. They have continued it this year, and I am pleased to say that some of my art is exhibited.

If you are interested, you can reach the virtual art gallery on http://www.hailshamfestival.co.uk

Do you have anything similar where you live?

I just went to loo, online at the gallery, and my work isn’t there! Still there are some good artists, so it’s still worth a look.

Further update.

My work is now there. You have to click on the picture shown and it then brings up the others.

While you’re there, take a look at some of the other excellent artists’ work.

From Reader to Writer: My Story

I saw a post on Reddit where the person asked about how we each came about being a writer. I answered, but then thought it might make a post for my blog.

In the beginning, I always loved books and stories for as long as I can remember. When I was very little, long before I could read, maybe about 3 years old, I loved a story called Pink and Ponk. It’s still available on Amazon! I knew it off by heart. One say, I was holding the book and speaking the words, when a friend of my mother saw me and thought I was actually reading!

When I could read for myself, I read a book by Enid Blyton, called Shadow the Sheepdog. I loved that book and reread it many times. It inspired me to write my own story. That was the first story I remember writing. I also devoured many other of her books, as well as books like Black Beauty and Little Women.

Also, when a child I made a little fairy out of grass and made up tales for my little sister about it.

When I was at school, I loved English lessons where we were told to write a story or an essay. I enjoyed both types of writing. I also enjoyed the literature lessons where we read many classic books. It was here that I discovered the Bronte sisters. And unlike many of my compatriots, I also enjoyed poetry.

In my teens I wrote a very bad romance. I only read it to my friends, They were kind about it, but fortunately, it has now disappeared into the mists of time.

After my A levels, I went to do teacher training in Manchester. Here I studied science as a main subject and maths as one of my subsidiaries. As I liked English literature, I chose that as my other subsidiary subject. It was here, at college, that I took to writing some poetry. My first ever published work was a poem I wrote about the atomic bomb. (It was the time of the Cold War, the Aldermaston Marches and CND.) It was published in the magazine of UMIST (University of Manchester Institute of Science and Technology).

During this time, I discovered Lord of the Rings, I was doing a teaching practice at a primary school. A 9 year-old boy asked me if I’d ever read it, and recommended it to me, telling me I should first read The Hobbit. When I found them in the library, I was immediately turned on to fantasy.

Then my writing adventures stopped as I began work, got married and had a family. No time for writing.

My writing started with a Dungeons and Dragons scenario I wrote. I read the Dragonlance Saga and found out it was based on a D&D scenario, and I thought I’d try my hand at converting my scenario to a novel. A standalone was what it was going to be, but in the way these things happen, it’s now up to the 4th book with more to come. The story hasn’t yet finished. (Although the characters think it has!)

Then came the inspiration to write Elemental Worlds, which turned into a duo. It could have been a standalone, but it would have been rather long. I really enjoyed writing that one (or pair, I should say!)

I began writing poetry again at this time.

My daughter had a book when she was little that had a very short story or poem for every day of the year, so I conceived of writing one poem every day for a full year. I did manage to do this, and it’s now published as 2 volumes, January to June and July to December. It has a variety of poems from limericks and haiku to longer narrative poems. Some serious, some amusing.

Another thing that has been fermenting in my head for decades is a saga of a family through the ages. This started when I was in my teens and I was walking with a friend and her family in Derbyshire. We came across a ruined mansion. This picture has been in my head ever since, so I started to write a historical series, now up to Book 2.

I’ve also written 3 novellas; The Wolves of Vimar prequels.

Currently I’m writing Book 3 of the historical series, and hope to soon get on to Book 5 of my fantasy series (The Wolves of Vimar.) I am also working on some short(ish) stories inspired by fairy tales. 2 are already written and 3 is on the way.

And that’s how I became a writer!

If you are interested in any of my books, you can click on the image in the side bar. It will take you to where you can choose your favourite retailer.

Some of these books are also available as audiobooks.

Review of Shadows and Birdsong by Kevin Morris

I don’t usually post two reviews immediately one after the other, but I was asked to review this collection of poems, so here is another.

I was given a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.ย 

This book of poems comprises thoughtful images. Kevin Morris writes beautifully about his life experiences. He contemplates mortality in his poems, but not in a morbid way. 

His thoughts from hospital, where he underwent an operation for a brain abscess, give us an insight into his thoughts on this close brush with the Grim Reaper.

The poems in memory of his friend are touching. Here is one of my favourites.

Your Shadow 

On a day in early springย 
I heard the birds singย 
As we walked togetherย 
And, as we walked,ย 
I wished to talkย 
With you my dear old friend.ย 
But it was my shadowย 
That walked in sunshineย 
For you have crossed the lineย 
Where all things end.

I cannot cryย 
Or go where you have gone,ย 
Yet our friendship lives onย 
And one day I will becomeย 
A shadow in sunย 
And shadeย 
For life is madeย 
Of fleeting shadows.ย 
And I knowย 
That I must one day goย 
Where you have gone.ย 
But other menย 
May see my shadowย 
Walking beside themย 
And know meย 
And their own mortality.

I also enjoyed the one he wrote to his guide dog, Apollo.

Dog and Human (Dedicated to Apollo) 

You know not what I writeย 
As day turns to nightย 
But lie near meย 
Unaware of our shared mortality.
We love our walks.ย 
You just do
What dogs doโ€”ย 
While I have my thoughtsย 
Of endingsย 
And how I envy you!

I enjoy Morris’s unusual rhyme schemes. They make the poems interesting and unusual. And I love the cover.

This is a wonderful collection of poems, and I fully recommend them to you. Even if you’re not a poetry person,  you will be sure to find some you enjoy. They will give you food for thought.

I give it 5*

The explanation of my ranking of books doesn’t fit with poetry as it’s for novels.

Have you read ;any of Kevin Morris’s poetry? What did you think of it? Please leave your comments in the comments box.

Review of Isabel By Marina Montrose


OVERVIEW
This is a โ€˜niceโ€™ Regency story. There is little to object to about it. However, I found it very similar to her first book in this series.

STORY
Isabel is a young woman whose family has fallen on hard times. Her father has recently died and left debts.
When Francis, Earl of Bengrave asks for her hand in marriage, she sees it as a way to help her family, and agrees to marry him, although she barely knows him. What she does know, is that he has a reputation as a rake, and has a long-term mistress, Mrs Morrell.
Francis needs to marry to secure an heir for his title and fortune, and has picked Isabel as a likely candidate.
The couple agree not to interfere with each other’s lives too much.
The story is told from the POVs of both Isabel and Francis.

CHARACTERS
Isabel. At the beginning, Isabel is naturally nervous of the unknown man she has married, but gradually, as she learns her husband is basically a kind and generous man. As she grows in confidence, so she asserts herself more.
Francis. He is naturally worried his lifestyle will be impacted, but tries hard with his new wife, giving her gifts, although he is reluctant to join in with the Regency society.
I did feel that he was very similar to the protagonist in her first book,

WRITING
Although well-written from the point of view of grammar and spelling, I felt the story was a little too simplistic. There was little tension. The protagonists didn’t have to struggle much to discover they had fallen in love with each other. Nor did Francis have too much difficulty in getting rid of his mistress. That could have been made much more of, and becomes built around ‘will he, won’t he’ get rid of her.
The other thing I felt was that the protagonist in this book was almost interchangeable with the one in her first.
Nevertheless, it was a pleasant and easy read.

I give it 3*



My ranking of books.
In order to get a particular number of stars, it is not necessary to meet all the criteria. This is a guide only.
5* Exceptional. Wonderful story. Setting well drawn, and characters believableโ€“not perfect, but with flaws. Will keep you up all night. No typos or grammatical errors.
4* A thoroughly enjoyable read. Great and original story. Believable setting and characters. Very few grammatical errors or typos.
3* I enjoyed it. Good story. Characters need some development. Some typos or grammatical errors.
2* Not for me. Story not very strong. Unbelievable and flat characters. Setting not clearly defined. Many typos or grammatical errors.
1* I hated it. Story almost non-existent. Setting poor. Possibly couldn’t finish it.

An Interview with Archmage Ysallithisandra from The Wolves of Vimar Series.

I decided to repost some of my earlier blog posts as there are new people who won’t have seen them. Here is the first one.

I apologise for being a day late with the interview with Archmage Yssalithisandra, but she was  extremely busy with some new magic texts that have recently come to light and put the interview off for a day.

Me: Good morning, Archmage Yssalithisandra. I am glad you decided to meet me and answer afew questions that our readers would like toknow about.

Yssa: Please call me Yssa. Everyone does, you know. It is a pleasure to be interviewed by you.

Me: How is it that an elf is working in Hambara and not in Rindisillaron, the elven homeland?

Yssa: I came here because of the Mage Tower. There is no longer one in Rindissillaron, you know.

Me: I believe there was one once though. Why has it not been found or rebuilt?

Yssa: Mage towers are always built on special places where the mana is at its strongest. Places where it wells up rather like springs out of the ground. The whereabouts of the Mage Tower in Rindisillaron has long been forgotten, as is the case of the towers in most places in Khalram.

Me: Why has this occurred?

Yssa: It was after the Forbidding when they were deserted for several hundred years.

Me: The Forbidding?

Yssa: Yes. Two hundred or so years after the death of Sauvern, there was an uprising by a group of mages who thought that because they could weave the mana, they were superior to others and that they should be the rulers of all the lands in Khalram. There was another group who opposed them, of course and the result was a terrible war. The results were so devastating that when the rightful rulers were restored, the practice of magic was forbidden throughout the lands that make up Khalram. All books of magic were burned and the mage towers were, for the most part destroyed. All people who could do any magic were put to death too.

Me: So that is why you are researching  the past. To find the lost spells. How long ago did the Forbidding occur?

Yssa: How long? Well it began about 600 years ago and lasted for about 3oo years. That means that it ended about 300 years ago.

Me: And in 300 years you still haven’t found all that was lost?

Yssa: Remember; there were no mages in the continent when it ended, nor any books. We had to start again from scratch.

Me: How is your work coming on?

Yssa: Oh, we’re beginning to make more progress and we keep finding books that had been hidden away by mages when they thought they would be executed. One such is the one Mabryl found and Carthinal brought to Hambara.

Me: Do you think that the mage towers will ever be re-built?

Yssa: That depends on whether or not we can find where the nodes were that they were built on. In the past there were said to have been mages who were able to detect these places, but we know of none at the moment. There are a few mages who can weave the mana without recourse to arcane language and hand gestures, but use just the power of thought, and it  is possible that some of these could do so as they are much more sensitive to magic. We have yet to find any though, so at the moment it’s just a hypothesis.

Me: You met Carthinal when he came to take his tests. What did you think of him?

Yssa: (blushing slightly) He is a very charismatic young man. He is also a very talented mage. I oversaw his practical test, as you probably know, and was most impressed.

Me: Is it true that you had a relationship with him while he was in Hasmbara?

Yssa: (looking down at her hands.) Yes. It was brief, and then he left to do the job that the Duke set him. I don’t know when he’ll be back, but I don’t expect him to want to continue with me.

Me: Do you think you will ever go back to Rindissillaron?

Yssa: Probably not. I do go to visit my parents as often as I can. Mother says it’s not often enough of course. She misses me, I think. I have no brothers and sisters, so I’m her little lost lamb. She means well, but she does fuss.

Me: Thank you for giving up your precious time, Archmage.

Yssa: Yssa!

Me: Sorry, Yssa. I am sure our readers will be interested in the history that you have told us about, and good luck with the research.

Yssa: Thank you. It was a pleasure talking to you. Grillon’s blessings on your readers.

Carthinal met Yssa when he went to the Mage Tower in Hambara to complete his apprenticeship as a mage. They had a brief affair before Carthinal went on the quest to find Sauvern’s Sword.

Later Yssa became more important in Carthinal’s life and appears in several of the books in the series.

If you would like to know more about Yssa and Carthinal, you can read about them in The Wolf Pack, Book 1 of The Wolves of Vimar series.

The ebook version ofThe Wolf Pack is free.

Click on the book title to buy, or on the book’s image in the side bar to go to your favourite online store.

There are also some prequels where you can find out a bit more about the characters in the books.

The Terrible Effects of Avocados

I was just reading about avocado growing, and how it is having a terrible effect on the world. Deforestation, crime, causing droughts by water use etc.

But you can read it for yourself by following this link!

Do you eat avocados? Will the information in this stop or reduce your consumption?

Feel free to share this, and link back to this site.

A Disturbing Story from Beetley Pete

I’m trying to get back into blogging after a hiatus. I thought I’d post this story.

It’s rather disturbing, but I think it should be read by as many people as possible. This kind of thing has happened before, and I can see the distinct possibility of it happening again. That worries me.

Some people might say that this is only fiction, but beware! Fiction can become fact.

Here’s the link to Pete’s post: A Fine New Career.

Pete has an interesting blog. He posts fiction in serials, but also pictures, snippets about his life in Norfolk, and funnies. It’s well worth a look at some of his other posts while you’re there.

There are dragons and magic in the world if only you look for them… V.M. Sang