From Reader to Writer: My Story

I saw a post on Reddit where the person asked about how we each came about being a writer. I answered, but then thought it might make a post for my blog.

In the beginning, I always loved books and stories for as long as I can remember. When I was very little, long before I could read, maybe about 3 years old, I loved a story called Pink and Ponk. It’s still available on Amazon! I knew it off by heart. One say, I was holding the book and speaking the words, when a friend of my mother saw me and thought I was actually reading!

When I could read for myself, I read a book by Enid Blyton, called Shadow the Sheepdog. I loved that book and reread it many times. It inspired me to write my own story. That was the first story I remember writing. I also devoured many other of her books, as well as books like Black Beauty and Little Women.

Also, when a child I made a little fairy out of grass and made up tales for my little sister about it.

When I was at school, I loved English lessons where we were told to write a story or an essay. I enjoyed both types of writing. I also enjoyed the literature lessons where we read many classic books. It was here that I discovered the Bronte sisters. And unlike many of my compatriots, I also enjoyed poetry.

In my teens I wrote a very bad romance. I only read it to my friends, They were kind about it, but fortunately, it has now disappeared into the mists of time.

After my A levels, I went to do teacher training in Manchester. Here I studied science as a main subject and maths as one of my subsidiaries. As I liked English literature, I chose that as my other subsidiary subject. It was here, at college, that I took to writing some poetry. My first ever published work was a poem I wrote about the atomic bomb. (It was the time of the Cold War, the Aldermaston Marches and CND.) It was published in the magazine of UMIST (University of Manchester Institute of Science and Technology).

During this time, I discovered Lord of the Rings, I was doing a teaching practice at a primary school. A 9 year-old boy asked me if I’d ever read it, and recommended it to me, telling me I should first read The Hobbit. When I found them in the library, I was immediately turned on to fantasy.

Then my writing adventures stopped as I began work, got married and had a family. No time for writing.

My writing started with a Dungeons and Dragons scenario I wrote. I read the Dragonlance Saga and found out it was based on a D&D scenario, and I thought I’d try my hand at converting my scenario to a novel. A standalone was what it was going to be, but in the way these things happen, it’s now up to the 4th book with more to come. The story hasn’t yet finished. (Although the characters think it has!)

Then came the inspiration to write Elemental Worlds, which turned into a duo. It could have been a standalone, but it would have been rather long. I really enjoyed writing that one (or pair, I should say!)

I began writing poetry again at this time.

My daughter had a book when she was little that had a very short story or poem for every day of the year, so I conceived of writing one poem every day for a full year. I did manage to do this, and it’s now published as 2 volumes, January to June and July to December. It has a variety of poems from limericks and haiku to longer narrative poems. Some serious, some amusing.

Another thing that has been fermenting in my head for decades is a saga of a family through the ages. This started when I was in my teens and I was walking with a friend and her family in Derbyshire. We came across a ruined mansion. This picture has been in my head ever since, so I started to write a historical series, now up to Book 2.

I’ve also written 3 novellas; The Wolves of Vimar prequels.

Currently I’m writing Book 3 of the historical series, and hope to soon get on to Book 5 of my fantasy series (The Wolves of Vimar.) I am also working on some short(ish) stories inspired by fairy tales. 2 are already written and 3 is on the way.

And that’s how I became a writer!

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Review of Shadows and Birdsong by Kevin Morris

I don’t usually post two reviews immediately one after the other, but I was asked to review this collection of poems, so here is another.

I was given a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. 

This book of poems comprises thoughtful images. Kevin Morris writes beautifully about his life experiences. He contemplates mortality in his poems, but not in a morbid way. 

His thoughts from hospital, where he underwent an operation for a brain abscess, give us an insight into his thoughts on this close brush with the Grim Reaper.

The poems in memory of his friend are touching. Here is one of my favourites.

Your Shadow 

On a day in early spring 
I heard the birds sing 
As we walked together 
And, as we walked, 
I wished to talk 
With you my dear old friend. 
But it was my shadow 
That walked in sunshine 
For you have crossed the line 
Where all things end.

I cannot cry 
Or go where you have gone, 
Yet our friendship lives on 
And one day I will become 
A shadow in sun 
And shade 
For life is made 
Of fleeting shadows. 
And I know 
That I must one day go 
Where you have gone. 
But other men 
May see my shadow 
Walking beside them 
And know me 
And their own mortality.

I also enjoyed the one he wrote to his guide dog, Apollo.

Dog and Human (Dedicated to Apollo) 

You know not what I write 
As day turns to night 
But lie near me 
Unaware of our shared mortality.
We love our walks. 
You just do
What dogs do— 
While I have my thoughts 
Of endings 
And how I envy you!

I enjoy Morris’s unusual rhyme schemes. They make the poems interesting and unusual. And I love the cover.

This is a wonderful collection of poems, and I fully recommend them to you. Even if you’re not a poetry person,  you will be sure to find some you enjoy. They will give you food for thought.

I give it 5*

The explanation of my ranking of books doesn’t fit with poetry as it’s for novels.

Have you read ;any of Kevin Morris’s poetry? What did you think of it? Please leave your comments in the comments box.

Review of Isabel By Marina Montrose


OVERVIEW
This is a ‘nice’ Regency story. There is little to object to about it. However, I found it very similar to her first book in this series.

STORY
Isabel is a young woman whose family has fallen on hard times. Her father has recently died and left debts.
When Francis, Earl of Bengrave asks for her hand in marriage, she sees it as a way to help her family, and agrees to marry him, although she barely knows him. What she does know, is that he has a reputation as a rake, and has a long-term mistress, Mrs Morrell.
Francis needs to marry to secure an heir for his title and fortune, and has picked Isabel as a likely candidate.
The couple agree not to interfere with each other’s lives too much.
The story is told from the POVs of both Isabel and Francis.

CHARACTERS
Isabel. At the beginning, Isabel is naturally nervous of the unknown man she has married, but gradually, as she learns her husband is basically a kind and generous man. As she grows in confidence, so she asserts herself more.
Francis. He is naturally worried his lifestyle will be impacted, but tries hard with his new wife, giving her gifts, although he is reluctant to join in with the Regency society.
I did feel that he was very similar to the protagonist in her first book,

WRITING
Although well-written from the point of view of grammar and spelling, I felt the story was a little too simplistic. There was little tension. The protagonists didn’t have to struggle much to discover they had fallen in love with each other. Nor did Francis have too much difficulty in getting rid of his mistress. That could have been made much more of, and becomes built around ‘will he, won’t he’ get rid of her.
The other thing I felt was that the protagonist in this book was almost interchangeable with the one in her first.
Nevertheless, it was a pleasant and easy read.

I give it 3*



My ranking of books.
In order to get a particular number of stars, it is not necessary to meet all the criteria. This is a guide only.
5* Exceptional. Wonderful story. Setting well drawn, and characters believable–not perfect, but with flaws. Will keep you up all night. No typos or grammatical errors.
4* A thoroughly enjoyable read. Great and original story. Believable setting and characters. Very few grammatical errors or typos.
3* I enjoyed it. Good story. Characters need some development. Some typos or grammatical errors.
2* Not for me. Story not very strong. Unbelievable and flat characters. Setting not clearly defined. Many typos or grammatical errors.
1* I hated it. Story almost non-existent. Setting poor. Possibly couldn’t finish it.

An Interview with Archmage Ysallithisandra from The Wolves of Vimar Series.

I decided to repost some of my earlier blog posts as there are new people who won’t have seen them. Here is the first one.

I apologise for being a day late with the interview with Archmage Yssalithisandra, but she was  extremely busy with some new magic texts that have recently come to light and put the interview off for a day.

Me: Good morning, Archmage Yssalithisandra. I am glad you decided to meet me and answer afew questions that our readers would like toknow about.

Yssa: Please call me Yssa. Everyone does, you know. It is a pleasure to be interviewed by you.

Me: How is it that an elf is working in Hambara and not in Rindisillaron, the elven homeland?

Yssa: I came here because of the Mage Tower. There is no longer one in Rindissillaron, you know.

Me: I believe there was one once though. Why has it not been found or rebuilt?

Yssa: Mage towers are always built on special places where the mana is at its strongest. Places where it wells up rather like springs out of the ground. The whereabouts of the Mage Tower in Rindisillaron has long been forgotten, as is the case of the towers in most places in Khalram.

Me: Why has this occurred?

Yssa: It was after the Forbidding when they were deserted for several hundred years.

Me: The Forbidding?

Yssa: Yes. Two hundred or so years after the death of Sauvern, there was an uprising by a group of mages who thought that because they could weave the mana, they were superior to others and that they should be the rulers of all the lands in Khalram. There was another group who opposed them, of course and the result was a terrible war. The results were so devastating that when the rightful rulers were restored, the practice of magic was forbidden throughout the lands that make up Khalram. All books of magic were burned and the mage towers were, for the most part destroyed. All people who could do any magic were put to death too.

Me: So that is why you are researching  the past. To find the lost spells. How long ago did the Forbidding occur?

Yssa: How long? Well it began about 600 years ago and lasted for about 3oo years. That means that it ended about 300 years ago.

Me: And in 300 years you still haven’t found all that was lost?

Yssa: Remember; there were no mages in the continent when it ended, nor any books. We had to start again from scratch.

Me: How is your work coming on?

Yssa: Oh, we’re beginning to make more progress and we keep finding books that had been hidden away by mages when they thought they would be executed. One such is the one Mabryl found and Carthinal brought to Hambara.

Me: Do you think that the mage towers will ever be re-built?

Yssa: That depends on whether or not we can find where the nodes were that they were built on. In the past there were said to have been mages who were able to detect these places, but we know of none at the moment. There are a few mages who can weave the mana without recourse to arcane language and hand gestures, but use just the power of thought, and it  is possible that some of these could do so as they are much more sensitive to magic. We have yet to find any though, so at the moment it’s just a hypothesis.

Me: You met Carthinal when he came to take his tests. What did you think of him?

Yssa: (blushing slightly) He is a very charismatic young man. He is also a very talented mage. I oversaw his practical test, as you probably know, and was most impressed.

Me: Is it true that you had a relationship with him while he was in Hasmbara?

Yssa: (looking down at her hands.) Yes. It was brief, and then he left to do the job that the Duke set him. I don’t know when he’ll be back, but I don’t expect him to want to continue with me.

Me: Do you think you will ever go back to Rindissillaron?

Yssa: Probably not. I do go to visit my parents as often as I can. Mother says it’s not often enough of course. She misses me, I think. I have no brothers and sisters, so I’m her little lost lamb. She means well, but she does fuss.

Me: Thank you for giving up your precious time, Archmage.

Yssa: Yssa!

Me: Sorry, Yssa. I am sure our readers will be interested in the history that you have told us about, and good luck with the research.

Yssa: Thank you. It was a pleasure talking to you. Grillon’s blessings on your readers.

Carthinal met Yssa when he went to the Mage Tower in Hambara to complete his apprenticeship as a mage. They had a brief affair before Carthinal went on the quest to find Sauvern’s Sword.

Later Yssa became more important in Carthinal’s life and appears in several of the books in the series.

If you would like to know more about Yssa and Carthinal, you can read about them in The Wolf Pack, Book 1 of The Wolves of Vimar series.

The ebook version ofThe Wolf Pack is free.

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There are also some prequels where you can find out a bit more about the characters in the books.

The Terrible Effects of Avocados

I was just reading about avocado growing, and how it is having a terrible effect on the world. Deforestation, crime, causing droughts by water use etc.

But you can read it for yourself by following this link!

Do you eat avocados? Will the information in this stop or reduce your consumption?

Feel free to share this, and link back to this site.

A Disturbing Story from Beetley Pete

I’m trying to get back into blogging after a hiatus. I thought I’d post this story.

It’s rather disturbing, but I think it should be read by as many people as possible. This kind of thing has happened before, and I can see the distinct possibility of it happening again. That worries me.

Some people might say that this is only fiction, but beware! Fiction can become fact.

Here’s the link to Pete’s post: A Fine New Career.

Pete has an interesting blog. He posts fiction in serials, but also pictures, snippets about his life in Norfolk, and funnies. It’s well worth a look at some of his other posts while you’re there.

Not in a good place.

I’m back from my holiday, but am now, as the title says, not in a good place. I have lost my enthusiasm for writing and haven’t done any for weeks. I hope this passes.

Personal things have raised their heads, too. I don’t want to go into them, but they are affecting how I feel about things.

I can’t bring myself to write my regular blog post at the moment, but I will still visit and comment on your posts. I may even reblog some if that’s OK.

I hope things will get back to normal soon.

A Little Holiday

You may have (or not) noticed I’ve not posted this week. I’m trying to finish a story and it’s taking me forever. It’s supposed to be a short story, but it’s getting too long.

I’m going on holiday at the end of this month, too. It includes the first week in June, so I’m going to take a break from blogging until I get back. Then I can hopefully finish the story and get on with my historical novel.

I will, however, read your posts!

Review of Alone by Anna Michelle Page

Overview. 

This was an exciting read. It had me turning the pages anxiously wanting to know what happened next.

Story.

London is a spy. She works for the CIA and has been sent to Korea with a special mission–to destroy a particular weapon that the North Koreans have been developing.

But London is a damaged young woman after abuse, and has decided that being alone is safe. She has no fear of dying, and in fact looks forward to it and fully expects to die on one of her missions.

Then she meets the Commander. He is a South Korean, leading a small group of men, who are devoted to him. He observes how she handles a persistent soldier from the US army who is pestering her, and becomes fascinated with her.

London tries to reject the offered friendship of the Commander, but he is understanding of her problems, although he doesn’t know any details. He gently tries to get her to trust him, much like winning the trust of a frightened deer.

She, in spite of not wanting to like him, finds herself being drawn to him in a way she finds unsettling.

But her mission is dangerous, and she expects not to survive it. She has not reckoned with the Commander, though. He manages to extricate her, but she has to go into hiding as she is pursued by an assassin after her mission to destroy the weapon.

Blurb

Alone Trained to survive. Destined to be alone. Until him.

London moves through the world as a ghost—unseen, unstoppable, untraceable. Trained for precision, she leaves no loose ends. But the military town of Cheondochon, South Korea changes everything.

Posing as a saloon girl at the Whiskey River, she hides in plain sight, where deception is her greatest weapon—until the Commander crosses her path.

He sees through her disguise, sensing the predator beneath the surface. Their connection is undeniable, dangerous—an attraction that threatens to dismantle her mission and expose the secrets she has buried deep.

Then the operation unravels.

A brutal attack by a DPRK assassin after she takes out a secret super engine, forces her to confront a past she thought was dead. Killing the man who once controlled her should have been justice—but instead, it shatters everything. Her mind fractures, her memories slip away, and the Commander makes an impossible choice. Hidden among monks in Japan, she rebuilds, heals, remembers.

Now, in England, she waits—not as an assassin, not as an agent, but as a woman. Waiting. Hoping. Longing for the day the Commander finds her. When he does, can London face the one mission that ever truly mattered – love?

Characters

London. This is not her real name, as we learn later in the book. She is a hard woman, made so by her difficult past. She is dangerous, clever and a killer for the CIA. She slips in and out of places unseen, if she so wishes. She knows she is safest when she is working alone. In spite of being a hard character, I found myself liking her. 

The Commander. London realises this man is her equal in combat skills, sneaking, bushcraft and spying. She hopes they won’t be pitted against each other and that his death isn’t what she is required to accomplish.

On his part, the Commander hopes the same thing. He quickly realises that she has been badly damaged by her past and wants to help her. 

In spite of being a tough soldier, he is kind and sympathetic, coaxing her from her skewed view of the world.

I liked him a lot.

Joe. Joe is also working for the CIA and is the man who organises London’s missions. Unknown to her, Joe is in love with London.

Claire is also a CIA agent, posing as an American woman running an American bar. She dislikes London, partly because of Joe’s infatuation.

Writing.

Ms Page has given us a page turner. After the first few pages, I was gripped by the story, thanks to the excellent way the characters were portrayed,  and the pace of the action. There were also a few quiet moments that were well written, showing the softer side of these tough people.

The grammar was good, and there were few, if any, typos.

Just one factual error that didn’t spoil it for me, and wouldn’t be noticed by most people. Ipswich, UK, isn’t a seaside town! Not far away, though.

An enjoyable read that I would recommend to anyone who enjoys a good adventure story.

I give it 5*

 My ranking of books.

In order to get a particular number of stars, it is not necessary to meet all the criteria. This is a guide only.

5* Exceptional. Wonderful story. Setting well drawn, and characters believable–not perfect, but with flaws. Will keep you up all night. No typos or grammatical errors.

4* A thoroughly enjoyable read. Great and original story. Believable setting and characters. Very few grammatical errors or typos.

3* I enjoyed it. Good story. Characters need some development. Some typos or grammatical errors.

2* Not for me. Story not very strong. Unbelievable and flat characters. Setting not clearly defined. Many typos or grammatical errors.

1* I hated it. Story almost non-existent. Setting poor. Possibly couldn’t finish it.

There are dragons and magic in the world if only you look for them… V.M. Sang