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Review of Alone by Anna Michelle Page

Overview.ย 

This was an exciting read. It had me turning the pages anxiously wanting to know what happened next.

Story.

London is a spy. She works for the CIA and has been sent to Korea with a special missionโ€“to destroy a particular weapon that the North Koreans have been developing.

But London is a damaged young woman after abuse, and has decided that being alone is safe. She has no fear of dying, and in fact looks forward to it and fully expects to die on one of her missions.

Then she meets the Commander. He is a South Korean, leading a small group of men, who are devoted to him. He observes how she handles a persistent soldier from the US army who is pestering her, and becomes fascinated with her.

London tries to reject the offered friendship of the Commander, but he is understanding of her problems, although he doesnโ€™t know any details. He gently tries to get her to trust him, much like winning the trust of a frightened deer.

She, in spite of not wanting to like him, finds herself being drawn to him in a way she finds unsettling.

But her mission is dangerous, and she expects not to survive it. She has not reckoned with the Commander, though. He manages to extricate her, but she has to go into hiding as she is pursued by an assassin after her mission to destroy the weapon.

Blurb

Alone Trained to survive. Destined to be alone. Until him.

London moves through the world as a ghostโ€”unseen, unstoppable, untraceable. Trained for precision, she leaves no loose ends. But the military town of Cheondochon, South Korea changes everything.

Posing as a saloon girl at the Whiskey River, she hides in plain sight, where deception is her greatest weaponโ€”until the Commander crosses her path.

He sees through her disguise, sensing the predator beneath the surface. Their connection is undeniable, dangerousโ€”an attraction that threatens to dismantle her mission and expose the secrets she has buried deep.

Then the operation unravels.

A brutal attack by a DPRK assassin after she takes out a secret super engine, forces her to confront a past she thought was dead. Killing the man who once controlled her should have been justiceโ€”but instead, it shatters everything. Her mind fractures, her memories slip away, and the Commander makes an impossible choice. Hidden among monks in Japan, she rebuilds, heals, remembers.

Now, in England, she waitsโ€”not as an assassin, not as an agent, but as a woman. Waiting. Hoping. Longing for the day the Commander finds her. When he does, can London face the one mission that ever truly mattered โ€“ love?

Characters

London. This is not her real name, as we learn later in the book. She is a hard woman, made so by her difficult past. She is dangerous, clever and a killer for the CIA. She slips in and out of places unseen, if she so wishes. She knows she is safest when she is working alone. In spite of being a hard character, I found myself liking her.ย 

The Commander. London realises this man is her equal in combat skills, sneaking, bushcraft and spying. She hopes they wonโ€™t be pitted against each other and that his death isn’t what she is required to accomplish.

On his part, the Commander hopes the same thing. He quickly realises that she has been badly damaged by her past and wants to help her.ย 

In spite of being a tough soldier, he is kind and sympathetic, coaxing her from her skewed view of the world.

I liked him a lot.

Joe. Joe is also working for the CIA and is the man who organises London’s missions. Unknown to her, Joe is in love with London.

Claire is also a CIA agent, posing as an American woman running an American bar. She dislikes London, partly because of Joe’s infatuation.

Writing.

Ms Page has given us a page turner. After the first few pages, I was gripped by the story, thanks to the excellent way the characters were portrayed,ย  and the pace of the action. There were also a few quiet moments that were well written, showing the softer side of these tough people.

The grammar was good, and there were few, if any, typos.

Just one factual error that didn’t spoil it for me, and wouldn’t be noticed by most people. Ipswich, UK, isn’t a seaside town! Not far away, though.

An enjoyable read that I would recommend to anyone who enjoys a good adventure story.

I give it 5*

ย My ranking of books.

In order to get a particular number of stars, it is not necessary to meet all the criteria. This is a guide only.

5* Exceptional. Wonderful story. Setting well drawn, and characters believableโ€“not perfect, but with flaws. Will keep you up all night. No typos or grammatical errors.

4* A thoroughly enjoyable read. Great and original story. Believable setting and characters. Very few grammatical errors or typos.

3* I enjoyed it. Good story. Characters need some development. Some typos or grammatical errors.

2* Not for me. Story not very strong. Unbelievable and flat characters. Setting not clearly defined. Many typos or grammatical errors.

1* I hated it. Story almost non-existent. Setting poor. Possibly couldn’t finish it.

Day 2 of the WordCrafter โ€œPoetry Treasures 6: Seasonsโ€ Book Blog Tour โ€“ Jean-Jacques Fournier and Colleen Chesebro

Welcome to Day 2 of the WordCrafter Poetry Treasures 6: Seasons Book Blog Tour, where weโ€™re sending off the sixth volume of the Poetry Treasures anthology series, Seasons.

Each volume of this poetry anthology series features the work of the talented poets, spotlighted as guests on Robbie Cheadleโ€™s blog series, โ€œTreasuring Poetryโ€, from the previous year. Seasonsโ€™ poets were guests in 2025.


For this tour, youโ€™ll meet two poets at each stop, with fun facts about them and reviews of their work. Some of the contributors also share guest posts or poetry readings. Today, weโ€™re introducing Jean-Jacques Fournier and Colleen Chesebro.

And weโ€™re giving away three digital copies of the anthology in our Giveaway. Each comment earns a chance to win, so be sure to give a shout out and let us know you were there.


Giveaway


Weโ€™re giving away three digital copies of Poetry Treasures 6: Seasons.


Follow the tour and leave a comment at each stop for additional entries.
Winners are selected in a random drawing following the tour.

Tour Schedule
Mon. โ€“ Cindy Georgakas (Reading) & Kevin Morris – Poetry by Mich, Hotel by Masticadores, Masticadores Phillipines
Tues. โ€“ Jean-Jacques Fournier (Reading) & Colleen Chesebro (Reading) โ€“ Dragons Rule OK
Wed. โ€“ Freya Pickard & V.M. Sang (Reading) โ€“ JoyNealKidney.com
Thurs. โ€“ Joy Neal Kidney & Yvette Prior โ€“ Roberta Writes
Fri. โ€“ Michelle Ayon Navajas (Guest Post & Reading) & Marsha Ingrao (Guest Post & Reading) โ€“ Prior House
Sat. โ€“ Nolcha Fox & Robbie Cheadle โ€“ Writing to be Read

Introducing Poetry Treasures 6: Seasons

Picture caption: Cover of Poetry Treasures 6: Seasons

Blurb
Open the cover
and you will discover
Poetry Treasures
from the guests on
Robbie Cheadle’s 2025ย 
“Treasuring Poetry”
blog series
onย Writing to be Read.
ย 
Join poets Robbie Cheadle, Cindy Georgakas, Freya Pickard, V.M. Sang, Michelle Ayon Navajas, Marsha Ingrao, Nolcha Fox, Joy Neal Kidney, Kevin Morris, Jean-Jacques Fournier, Melissa Lemay, Yvette Prior, and special guest, Colleen Chesbro share their personal seasons of poetry.

Purchase link
https://books2read.com/PT6Seasons


Meet Jean-Jacques Fournier


Jean-Jacques Fournier is a native of Montrรฉal, in the province of Quรฉbec, Canada. He continued his studies while in the Canadian Navy and travelling substantially over the world. He started writing in earnest while living in California in the early eighties. In the process of reinventing himself numerous times, his penchant for the language of poetry seemed best suited, for him to express his emotions and life experiences. He then spent several years pursuing his writing in the south of France, during which time he published his first three books. ย He has long since moved back to Canada and is presently living in the Eastern Townships of Quรฉbec. He has published twenty-one books of poetry to date.


Jean-Jacques Fournierโ€™s blog isย Poetry on a canapรฉย 

Picture caption: Author photograph of Jean-Jacques Fournier

Fun Facts about Jean-Jacques Fournier


Heโ€™s always loved France, had moved to France, married a French woman, who in the end pulls him back to Canada.


Because he was constantly on the move, he was never truly interested in animals but now, he is surrounded by two indoor cats, as well as birds, racoons, deer, chipmunks, coyotes, foxes who all inhabit the garden.


He loves dancing since he was young and now, basically still young considering years passed, he continues dancing but mostly with the words.

Poetry Reading: โ€œI the Bumble Bee โ€“ in bombinate flightโ€https://youtu.be/ETprgKugzfM

A review of Poetry in Brief โ€“ a blissful silence โ€“ (review by author Paulette Mahurin)

Picture caption: Cover of Poetry in Brief โ€“ a blissful silence โ€“ by Jean-Jacques Fournier


From the lovely cover of “Poetry in Brief – a blissful silence” designed by Marianne Dessis and the book’s various represented artists like Paul Klee included on the pages of this special book of poetry to all the words depicting the human experience, I am stunned by masterful poetry. This is a special book of poetry and author Jean-Jacques Fournier has a great gift in his usage of words. A minimalist, he writes vast emotions that run deep and strong of all that it is to be alive. Each and every poem, unique in its message, draws the reader into thoughts and emotions. Way too many to enumerate on. This was an enticingly enjoyable book right down to the last poem: โ€œYe May Not Hear-past silent fearโ€ with its beautiful artwork by Mikalojus Konstantinas Ciurlionis โ€“ Silene, which was my favorite. Kudos to the author for this lovely achievement.


Purchase Poetry in Brief โ€“ a blissful silence โ€“ from Lulu here: https://www.lulu.com/shop/jean-jacques-fournier/poetry-in-brief-a-blissful-silence-/ebook/product-9vppw2.html?srsltid=AfmBOooRgWPVvjnWCRJTOlOhMUNgzKa7UNzAFgbFECsxQhkepWVd1d_T&page=1&pageSize=4


And from Amazon US here: https://www.amazon.com/Poetry-Brief-Forever-After/dp/B0GT7CJ29R


Meet Colleen Chesebro


Colleen M. Chesebro hails from the heartland of the Midwestern United States. After graduating, she enlisted in the U.S. Air Force, launching a lifelong journey of self-exploration. Following a successful career in accounting, Colleen returned to her creative roots, reigniting her love for poetry. Today, she enjoys crafting poetry, flash fiction, and both creative and nonfiction work.
In addition to her poetry books, Colleen has contributed to numerous anthologies featuring short stories, flash fiction, and poetry.
She actively supports her writing community on tankatuesday.com, by hosting a community syllabic poetry challenge called Tanka Tuesday, and by co-editing the Sunflower Tanka Anthology with Robbie Cheadle. This annual syllabic poetry anthology celebrates tanka, tanka prose, and other experimental tanka forms.
Residing in her dream home in mid-Michigan, Colleen enjoys the beauty of the Great Lakes with her husband and their two (unicorn) cats, Chloe and Sophie.
You can find her at Tanka Tuesday on http://www.tankatuesday.com.

Picture caption: Author photograph of Colleen Chesebro


Fun Facts about Colleen Chesebro


When I served in the USAF, I lived in England for several years.ย 


I crochet old-fashioned doilies with thread.


Iโ€™m taking a class in Jungian psychology and dream tending.ย 

Poetry Reading: โ€œThe Fight for Springโ€ (Haibun)
https://youtube.com/shorts/KMhNk_dNFNU?feature=share

A review of Sunflower Tanka: A 2025 Anthology of Tanka, Tanka Prose, & Experimental Tanka compiled by Colleen Chesebro and Robbie Cheadle (Amazon review)

Picture caption: Cover of Sunflower Tanka: A 2025 Anthology of Tanka, Tanka Prose, & Experimental Tanka compiled by Colleen Chesebro and Robbie Cheadle


Sunflower Tanka 2025 anthology of Tanka, Tanka Prose and Experimental Tanka begins with an introduction and a short explanation of the different forms of poetry included in this collection: Tanka, Tanka Prose, Bussokuseki, (a new form for me to try,) Rensaku, Experimental Tanka, Garland Tanka, Tanka Puente, and Taiga!

The topic is dreams. And what dreams they are for poets to indulge their creative juices in! Resulting in such a range of marvellous interpretations.

You’ll find poems from a wide variety of international poets to connect with. There are 54 poets in the 2025 anthology!

It is lovingly compiled by the contributing editors, Robbie Cheadle and Colleen Chesebro with a short analysis of their favourite poems at the end.

It’s a delightful collection and a great introduction to new poets to enjoy as well as old favourites to return to again.

I bought a paperback copy. What a treat.


Purchase Sunflower Tanka: A 2025 Anthology of Tanka, Tanka Prose, & Experimental Tanka from Amazon US here: https://www.amazon.com/Sunflower-Tanka-Anthology-Prose-Experimental/dp/B0G51RKG61

Wrap-Up


That wraps up Day 2 of the WordCrafter Poetry Treasures 6: Seasons. Join us again tomorrow over at JoyNealKidney.com, where weโ€™ll be meeting Freya Pickard and V.M. Sang.


Book yourย WordCrafter Book Blog Tourย today!

Trailer for Poetry Book

I am delighted to say that at the end of this month, an anthology of poetry will be released. It’s called Poetry Treasures 6. Seasons, and, I’m excited to say, some of my poetry is featured.


Here is a link to a video trailer: https://youtube.com/shorts/NUxIn1dcghg

Do pop over and have a look.

There’s also a blog tour happening next week. Wednesday’s visit will feature me! and includes a link to me reading one of my poems.

Tour Schedule

Monday, April 20th, 2026:ย Hotel by Masticadores,ย Masticadores Phillipinesย will feature Cindy Georgakas and Kevin Morris

Tuesday, April 21st, 2026:ย Dragons Rule OKย will featureย ย Jean-Jacques Fournierย and Colleen Chesebroย ย ย 

Wednesday, April 22nd, 2026:ย Joy Neal Kidneyย will feature Freya Pickard and V.M. Sang

Thursday, April 23rd, 2026:ย Roberta Writesย will feature authors Joy Neal Kidney and Yvette Prior.

Friday, April 24th, 2026:ย Priorhouse blogย will feature authors Michelle Ayon Navajas and Marsha Ingrao

Saturday, April 25th, 2026:ย Writing to be Readย will featureย Nolcha Fox and Robbie Cheadle.

All the poets here would be delighted if you’d visit.

If you want to know where you can buy the book, click the button.

A Chapter Removed from The Wolf Pack.

The half-elf leafed through the book he was studying. He was due to take the tests to end his apprenticeship soon. He was a tall, handsome young man, just over six feet with shoulder-length auburn hair, a closely trimmed beard and eyes of an intense deep blue. 

He sat in the study at the home of Mabryl in Bluehaven, which was situated on the south coast of the land of Grosmer. With him were Mabrylโ€™s other two apprentices, fourteen year old Tomac and sixteen year old Emmienne. 

Tomac pushed a lock of his unruly dark hair out of his eyes. โ€˜I think thatโ€™s the Master coming in now, Carthinal. Youโ€™d better get looking as though youโ€™ve been doing something instead of moping around waiting for that letter, or youโ€™ll be in trouble.โ€™

Mabryl, his master and adopted father had sent off to the Mage Tower in Hambara asking for the young man to be considered for the tests at the next opportunity.

As Tomac spoke, the door opened and Mabryl entered, shaking his cloak as he did so. โ€˜Itโ€™s pretty cold out there, and it’s turning to snow if Iโ€™m not mistaken. Unusual this far south.โ€™ He turned to his three apprentices. โ€˜Have you finished the tasks I set you?โ€™ He hung his cloak on a stand by the door. 

Carthinal stood and ambled to the fire, putting a fresh log on to the flames. โ€˜Come and get warm, and, no Iโ€™ve not finished. I canโ€™t settle to anything until I hear about whether I can take the tests soon. I think Emmienne has finished though. I canโ€™t say about Tomac.’

โ€˜Nearly,โ€™ replied Tomac, jumping from his chair and carrying his workbook to his master. โ€˜I was a little stuck on the moon phases, though.โ€™ He ran his fingers through his hair. โ€˜Itโ€™s complicated trying to work out both moons at the same time.โ€™

โ€˜Stick to it, youngster,โ€™ said Emmienne from the window seat. She grinned across at the younger boy, the grin lighting up her otherwise plain face. โ€˜I had problems too, but it comes eventually.โ€™

Tomac groaned and went back to his seat.

โ€˜Iโ€™ve finished though, Sir,โ€™ she said. โ€˜Iโ€™ve learned that new spell you gave me and am sure I can make it work. When can I try it?โ€™

Mabryl laughed. โ€˜Such enthusiasm. Weโ€™ll try it tomorrow, I think. In the meantime, Iโ€™ve made what I think may be a big discovery. Perhaps the most important one for many, many years. Look.โ€™ He put an ancient-looking book on the table. It had a red leather cover that sported a few cracks and scratches. On the front, in what had once been gold lettering, was the name Armron Filibur.  

The three apprentices gathered round.  

โ€˜I think it may be a spell book from before the Forbidding,โ€™ Mabryl said 

Emmienne gasped. โ€˜That is old. And if it is, we’ll be able to find lost spells. Youโ€™ll be famous, Sir.โ€™

โ€˜Calm down, Emm. It may not be the spell-book of a magister, or even an arch-mage.โ€™ Cardinal smiled at the girl . โ€˜It may only have the spells we already know and not any of the lost ones.โ€™

Around seven hundred and fifty years previously there had been a war between conflicting mages. It caused such devastation and hardship that, when it had ended, the king forbade the use of magic on pain of death. He ordered all spell books to be burned. 

Some mages, however, hid some of their books and these came to light occasionally. 

During this time, much knowledge was lost and now mages worked to try to re-discover the lost spells. If this book were to be of use, it would need to be taken to one of these mages.

The door opened and Lillora, Mabrylโ€™s housekeeper entered. โ€˜Sorry to disturb you, sir, but a bird arrived a few minutes ago. I thought you should know.โ€™ She glanced towards Carthinal and grinned, a twinkle in her eye. โ€˜Probably nothing important though.โ€™

โ€˜Iโ€™ll come and look,โ€™ Mabryl stood and left the three apprentices to their own devices.

Carthinal picked up the book and leafed through it. He could understand little of what was written there. Firstly it was in an archaic script and language and secondly he was as yet only an apprentice and had not acquired the knowledge to understand more than a limited number of spells. 

He frowned as he tried to read the words on the page. As he lifted the book from the table to take it nearer to the light, a loose page fell onto the floor. He stooped to pick it up and realised he could read it, unlike the rest of the book, and that it was not a page fallen out, but a note that had been inserted there. He took it to the window seat and sat by Emmienne to read it.

โ€˜Whatโ€™s that?โ€™ The brown-haired girl strained to read it upside down.

โ€˜Iโ€™m not sure.โ€™ Carthinal wrinkled his brow. โ€˜It fell out of the book Mabryl bought, but itโ€™s not the same writing, nor is it in the same archaic script. Itโ€™s a note of some kind.โ€™ He paused to read it.

As he read the note, Mabryl came back holding a piece of paper in his hand.

โ€˜Itโ€™s good news, Carthinal,โ€™ he told the young man. โ€˜Thereโ€™s a space for you to take your tests in the next batch, which take place just before Grillon’s Day. As thatโ€™s in about five sixdays weโ€™ll need to leave here soon to allow us time to settle in before your ordeal. Whatโ€™s that youโ€™ve got there?โ€™ He strode to the window seat and looked at the paper in Carthinalโ€™s hand.

โ€˜It fell out of the book you bought,โ€™ Cardinal replied . โ€˜It doesnโ€™t seem to be by the author of the book though. Itโ€™s in a more modern script that I can read. It doesnโ€™t make much sense though.โ€™ He handed it to Mabryl who read it, then reread it, this time out loud.

โ€˜โ€œWhen Kalhera descends from the mountains, and orcs once more roam the land,

When impossible beasts occur and the Never-Dying man is once more at hand.

Then the Sword that was lost must once more be found; only it can destroy the threat

And kill the immortal mortal to balance out his debt.โ€

โ€˜It does seem a strange thing to write,โ€™  Tomac said, โ€˜and it doesnโ€™t make a lot of sense either. How can Kalhera descend from the mountains? Sheโ€™s a god and the gods donโ€™t come down to Vimar.โ€™ 

Mabryl turned the page in his hand and saw some more writing on the back. 

โ€˜This says itโ€™s a quotation from something the writer heard and wrote down. The author says he visited the Oracle on Holy Island and this was what he was told the Oracle said earlier in the day to no one in particular. Only the attendants were present.โ€™ 

He replaced the paper in the book on the table and turned to Carthinal. โ€˜We must take this to a colleague of mine in the Mage Tower when we go. Sheโ€™s working on finding the old spells, I believe, and this may be of use to her. The loose note may be a prophecy if it came from the Oracle, but who knows when it was made? It could be that it was centuries ago, or yesterday; and it could be referring to a time well in the future or even in the past. I think we should ignore it for now. Lillora told me our lunch is almost ready, so I suggest we go to the table before she gets mad.โ€™

The three apprentices forgot all about the book and the note as they enjoyed the housekeeperโ€™s excellent cooking and after the meal they returned to their studies. 

Mabryl gave them all tasks to complete and went out again, taking the book with him.

<<>>

Duke Danu of Bluehaven had trained at the Mage Tower in his youth. He had some talent for magic, but with the death of his elder brother in an epidemic, he had to take over the duties and prepared to become the duke one day. He had never taken the tests to end his apprenticeship, but he retained an interest in magic and still practiced it in a small way. โ€˜To keep my hand in,โ€™ he told people. 

Today he sat in his study going over the accounts of the duchy when a knock came at the door.

โ€˜Arch-mage Mabryl to see you, sir,โ€™  his butler said.

โ€˜Send him in.โ€™ Danu rose from his seat and clasped Mabryl in a hug. โ€˜You’ve not been to visit in some while, my friend,โ€™ he scolded. โ€˜Busy with your three apprentices, I suppose.โ€™

Mabryl smiled at his friend. โ€˜Yes, they keep me busy. Carthinalโ€™s ready to take his tests and become a full mage now.โ€™

โ€˜Is that so?โ€™ Duke Danu raised an eyebrow. โ€˜Doesn’t time fly? Hardly seems any time at all when you took that scruffy little urchin off the streets. Everyone thought you were mad, you knowโ€“taking a street child to be your apprentic, then adopting him? Well, we were wrong. Heโ€™s turning out all right.โ€™

โ€˜Considering his background, yes. He still has his faults and I canโ€™t say there werenโ€™t times when I agreed with you Iโ€™d done the wrong thing. He still needs to control his temper better and his good looks donโ€™t help him to control his baser instincts. Girls, and older women too, flirt outrageously with him, and he enjoys it a little too much! But I didn’t come here to talk about Carthinal. Iโ€™ve made a discovery and I want your opinion.โ€™

 He pulled the spell-book out of a bag at his side. โ€˜Iโ€™m going to take this to Yssa at the Mage Tower when I take Carthinal. Sheโ€™ll be the best to decide how important it is.โ€™ He handed the book to Danu.

The duke whistled. โ€˜This is important, Mabryl. I canโ€™t read it, but it certainly looks like a spell-book to me. Itโ€™s old and could easily date to before the Forbidding.โ€™ He picked up the note that was still between its pages. โ€˜Whatโ€™s this?โ€™ 

โ€˜A little note that was in the book. Carthinal found it. It doesnโ€™t seem to belong to the book though, and Iโ€™ve thought it could be a hoax; someone putting a seeming prophecy in an important old book.โ€™

โ€˜Maybe, but I donโ€™t think so. Some research Iโ€™ve been doing suggests that Grosmer is about to face some danger. This may be a prophecy about that. I would suggest you take it to Rollo in Hambara when you go. His libraryโ€™s much more extensive than mine and he can find out more. Iโ€™ve been in touch with him about this possible danger so he knows a little of what I suspect.โ€™

โ€˜I donโ€™t know Duke Rollo,โ€™ Mabryl replied. โ€˜He may not believe me. Iโ€™ve heard heโ€™s a suspicious man. I think there is a possibility this note is a hoax even if you donโ€™t. I’ll need to prove that I’ve come from you.โ€™

โ€˜I’ll write you a letter to give to him.โ€™ Danu ambled to his desk and lifted his pen. โ€˜Iโ€™ll also give you this.โ€™ He picked up a small statuette of a trotting horse, about three inches long and two high that sat on his desk. โ€˜Itโ€™s one of a pair we found in our adventuring days. He has the other. Heโ€™ll know Iโ€™ve sent you when he sees that, especially if you ask him about the other one. Now, go and sit by the fire and Iโ€™ll get some wine for us to drink while we talk about other things.โ€™

The two old friends spent the afternoon remembering past times and gossiping about the goings on in the city of Bluehaven as the afternoon passed into evening and the dukeโ€™s work lay unfinished on the desk.

If you would like to find out more about this prophecy and what it means, click on the book title in the sidebar.

(This was supposed to be scheduled for next Tuesday, but WordPress, in its wisdom, has decided I should post it now! So this is next week’s post early.)

Time Passes

This is the poem for today from my poetry book, From January to June, One Poem a Day. In it there is one poem for every day of the year, including an extra for leap years.

This one is considering how quickly the years go by, especially later in life.

Image by Gerd Altmann from Pixabay

Time passes.

Tick tock. Time slips by,
One tick at a time.
The older we get,ย 
The faster it goes
I’m wondering why.

Tock tick. Time flows on.
It feels just last year
I could run quickly,
Pick up a hay bale
Throw it to the sheep.

Tick tock. Time goes forth.
It plods without care
Of how bodies grow old
But minds remain young
Think still they can do.

If you enjoyed this poem, or even if you didn’t, I welcome your opinion. Please leave any comments in the comments box.

If you would like to read more of my poetry, click on the image of the poetry book in the sidebar. This will take you to where you can choose to buy from your favourite online platform.

How I Write: The Journey of a Pantser Author

I thought I’d tell you a little about how I set about writing my books and stories today, but first, for those non-writers amongst you I’d better make a few things clear. Writers ignore this as you already know it.

There are two–no, three–kinds of writers.

First are the plotters. They are the ones who write like you were taught at school, setting out to write an outline of their work before beginning. These people might write just a simple outline, but others go much farther and write a chapter by chapter outline. They search for the Inciting incident, decide where the first plot point is going to come, and all the other things we are told a good story needs. Then they refer to this as they write. It helps them to stay focused on the plot and not wander off.

Second are what are known as pantsers. These writers write ‘by the seat of their pants’. They don’t write a plan but simply start writing and see where the story goes. Sometimes they are called ‘discovery writers’.

The third type is a combination of the two, sometimes known as plantsers. These writers don’t have a massively detailed plan, but will often have a very general outline which they sort of follow.

I describe myself as a pantser. I haven’t the patience to write a detailed plan, although I often have something in my head. I often know the ending of a story before I start.

I do like to know my characters, though, so I will look at their background and what brought them to this point, even if it isn’t going to be in the story. People’s backgrounds affect how they behave, so this is important.

But in my Wolves of Vimar series, I have produced 4 prequels giving the background of some of the characters. There may be more to come in the future.

Once I have the characters and know them a bit, I begin to write. I allow things to happen as they occur to me. Sometimes it seems as if the characters are taking over. The first time this happened (in writing The Wolf Pack) I thought I must be going mad, because a character did something I wasn’t expecting. (No spoilers, so I won’t say what it was.) Then I discovered that other writers also have characters take over. They don’t always do as we want them to. One of my characters who first appeared in The Wolf Pack, a small dragon-like creature about the size of a cat, made no appearance in the second book, The Never-Dying Man, nor the third, Wolf Moon, but he demanded my attention, saying he must have a bigger role to play and he could be useful. So Muldee became a spy in Immortal’s Death and had quite a big and important role.

Stories often take a turn from what I originally envisaged. This is exciting. Sometimes it means I might have to change the ending. (Getting the right ending is difficult, so as to leave the reader feeling satisfied.)

There are times when I’m simply not inspired. A story is going nowhere and I spend hours trying to decide what to write. If I force myself to start, I frequently find that things happen and ideas flow that didn’t when I was just thinking about it. I suppose the characters are there and telling me what they want! :)) I have a couple of stories like that at the moment, but I have another project on the go, so they will have to wait.

But this method can take you down rabbit holes. This, of course, means more work in the editing process. It has to be sorted before anything else happens. Parts removed that are unnecessary and don’t add anything to the plot. Maybe characters need removing if they don’t do anything. But these can always be kept for another story.

I often run it through Grammarly or Hemmingway, a couple of grammar checkers. After I’ve done all I think I can do, I post it on a couple of on-line critique groups. These are invaluable and help me polish the manuscript as well as pointing out places where they got confused. Yes, I write confusing stuff sometimes.

Only then is it fit for human consumption, as it were. I don’t have beta readers, unfortunately. I’ve been unable to find any reliable ones, so it has to stand after this.

I hope to soon be back to my third historical novel set in the aftermath of the Battle of Hastings.

Thank you for reading.

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Review of Catling’s Bane by D. Wallace Peach

Overview.

I thoroughly enjoyed this book. It’s the first of a series, and I’m looking forward to reading the others. A wonderful story, well told.

Blurb

Catling โ€“ Sheโ€™s a weapon desired by those who reign and those who rebel.

In the tiered cities of Ellegeance, the elite Influencersโ€™ Guild holds the power to manipulate emotions. Love and fear, pleasure and pain mark the extremes of their sway. But itโ€™s the subtle blends that hook their victimsโ€™ hearts. They hide behind oaths of loyalty and rule the world.

Until Catling discovers the gift that will be her bane. She is the shield that disrupts the influencerโ€™s sway.

Born in the grim warrens beneath the city, Catling rues the rose birthmark encircling her eye. Yet, it grants her a unique ability, the means to remake a civilization. To the Guild, she an aberration, a threat, and they order her death. No longer a helpless child, Catling has other plans.

As chaos shakes the foundations of order and rule, will she become the realmโ€™s savior? Or its executioner?

Welcome to a world of three moons, a sentient landscape, rivers of light, and tier cities that rise from the swamps like otherworld flowers. A planet of waterdragons, where humans are the aliens living among three-fingered natives with spotted skin. Where a half-blood converses with the fog and the goddess plans her final reckoning.

In the spirit of the fantasy tradition set by Patrick Rothfuss, Karen Miller, and Glenda Larke, follow Catlingโ€™s journey as she grows into the deadly force that shapes the future. She is the realmโ€™s shield, an influencer, assassin, healer, mother, and avenger. And all she desires is to go home.

Story

Catling is first met as a child of around two years. She has a birthmark over her right eye, and her mother tries to scrub it off. 

She has been born into the poor, who scrape a living under a large tiered city. The richer a person is, the higher in the tiers they live, culminating in the High Ward’s place of residence.

High Ward Algar holds onto his position by means of regular hangings and the use of โ€˜influencersโ€™ who can manipulate the emotions of the people. These influencers make people enjoy the hangings, and even influence those being hanged to be happy about it.

Catling discovers she can block the influencers. It has something to do with her birthmarked eye. She has the sense to keep it a secret, though. 

Her mother thinks she can improve her lot without a child, and when Catling is six, she sells her.

The man who buys the child has a large family, and is kind, so Catling enjoys her life there.

Then things begin to change. Her idyllic life is shattered.

I won’t say any more because of spoilers.

Characters

Ms Wallace Peach has given us a wealth of interesting characters. Each one is an individual, with their own quirks. 

I liked the way Ms Wallace Peach dealt with Catling growing up. She was confused, afraid, loving, all the things a young girl would feel. But her special talent made her want to remain hidden. It would be extremely dangerous for it to be discovered that she could block the influencers.

There are a lot of individuals in this book, and I’m not going to pick any out.

Writing.

I find Diana Wallace Peach’s writing beautiful. She spins a wonderful tale, and draws the reader into the story. 

The atmospheres she creates in the different parts of the book seem real. The abject poverty of the people at the beginning of the book; the richness of the higher tiers; the love Catling found on the farm; the river and its dangerous denizens; the swamp people; all are shown so we feel we are part of those communities.

The grammar is good–no, excellent, and there are few typos.

I give it 5*.

 My ranking of books.

In order to get a particular number of stars, it is not necessary to meet all the criteria. This is a guide only.

5* Exceptional. Wonderful story. Setting well drawn, and characters believableโ€“not perfect, but with flaws. Will keep you up all night. No typos or grammatical errors.

4* A thoroughly enjoyable read. Great and original story. Believable setting and characters. Very few grammatical errors or typos.

3* I enjoyed it. Good story. Characters need some development. Some typos or grammatical errors.

2* Not for me. Story not very strong. Unbelievable and flat characters. Setting not clearly defined. Many typos or grammatical errors.

1* I hated it. Story almost non-existent. Setting poor. Possibly couldn’t finish it.

Surviving the Horror: The Woods Family’s Final Stand

Overview

This is the third and final part of The Misery House trilogy. This has given me a problem as I don’t want to give away anything from the first two books into case you’ve not yet read them.

The series is a horror series set in a small town in the US. Looming over the town is an abandoned house, which gives its name to the series as a whole. The story is told in the first person, but from several points of view.

Blurb

Everyone feels safe in their own house. Until it’s too late.

The Woods family is at peace, at last. With Allison now safe. Kaia is not afraid. But everything changes when Allison gets sick… and another child from New Haven goes missing.

Everything leads to the house on the hill. And this time, the whole town is at stake.

Cliff Woods petitions to demolish the house. In response, New Haven slowly turns against him, looking for any reason or way to burn him down, instead. And it’s not hard to find.

At the same time, Kaia simply needs to make it until Nate graduates. Less than a year. But Rhys has more to tell her… Secrets from a hundred years ago.

When the Woods family is no longer safe in their own home, they only have one choice: Fight until the end.

But in this town, there are no happy endings.

Story

This is where it gets difficult. In the first two books, mysterious things happen. 

The main protagonists are the Woods familyโ€“Cliff, Naomi and their children, Kaia and Nate.

In the first two books, lights are seen in the house at night. Something chases Naomi Woods and her son, Nate, when they are on a bike ride. 

Then Kaia’s best friend, Alison, disappears at the house, having gone there with her new husband, Malaki.

At the end of book 2 it seems everything has returned to normal after its terrifying ending, but it’s only just beginning. And a mysterious young boy called Rhys turns up and no one can find out his background or parentage. He appears to know little either, even of normal Iife. Cliff and Naomi decide to foster him.

In this third book, the town turns against Cliff, especially when he suggests demolishing the house. 

We are taken back in time to learn something of the history of the house and how it came to be so horrific, and something of its current denizens.

Alison has been so traumatised by her experiences that she is undergoing therapy and her family has moved to the nearby city. The sheriff also has been so affected that he has to retire. And then his four year old son vanishes.

I don’t think I can say much more without spoilers.

Characters

Kaia Woods is a young woman who has just finished school and is trying to decide on her next move. She is struggling with her sexuality and her growing feelings for Alison. When her family is threatened, she finds courage and decides to go to the house to put an end to the dangers in spite of her fears.

Nate Woods is a young man just entering 8th grade at the beginning of the book. He is a keen baseball player who plays for his school team. As a typical teen, he spends much time playing on his X-box with Rhys. He is devastated when his team loses a match.

Like Kaia, he discovers he has more courage than he knew when his family is in danger.

Cliff Woods left New Haven to go to university where he met Naomi, a beautiful black girl. They married, and he brought her back to help run his father’s farm. He loves his wife deeply, and is an excellent father to Kaia and Nate. But his paternal feeling and desire to protect his family leads to his being ostracised by the towns folk. 

He is willing to sacrifice anything, even his life, to keep them safe.

Naomi Woods is a strong woman with a good heart. She works tirelessly for the good of the town and the church. When she feels her children are threatened, she becomes like a lioness and will overcome her fears to protect them.

It appears that, as the only black woman in town, she has been accepted by everyone, but appearances can be deceptive.

Rhys appears towards the end of Book 2. He is a mystery. He is revealed at the end of Book 2 after the climax. He says he can remember nothing of his past, and is baffled by many modern things, even baseball. He tries very hard to fit in and seems to want to be adopted by the Woods family. They all grow to care for him.

There are other characters, such as the Sheriff, Jeremy, who is Cliff’s friend, and Naomi’s friend, Susan, amongst others, but I’ll leave these characters for now.

Writing

David Kummer writes well. There are a few typos in the work, and he hasn’t got the hang of the difference between โ€˜layโ€™ and โ€˜lieโ€™, which he gets wrong every time.

Having said that, he does a good job of building the tension. I found it difficult to put down, and felt a connection with the Woods family.

One thing I wondered about was why he gave Cliff Woods two names. The townsfolk call him Cliff, but Naomi calls him Ben.

There were also, I felt, a few loose ends. Where did Silas, the antagonist, get his power from? for example. And was Alison’s I’ll health due to the

power of the house, and why? Also, why was the Woods family such a target from the beginning?

Still, apart from these things, it was a good read.

I give it 4*

 My ranking of books.

In order to get a particular number of stars, it is not necessary to meet all the criteria. This is a guide only.

5* Exceptional. Wonderful story. Setting well drawn, and characters believableโ€“not perfect, but with flaws. Will keep you up all night. No typos or grammatical errors.

4* A thoroughly enjoyable read. Great and original story. Believable setting and characters. Very few grammatical errors or typos.

3* I enjoyed it. Good story. Characters need some development. Some typos or grammatical errors.

2* Not for me. Story not very strong. Unbelievable and flat characters. Setting not clearly defined. Many typos or grammatical errors.

1* I hated it. Story almost non-existent. Setting poor. Possibly couldn’t finish it.

Review of Marguerite by Marina Montrose

Overview

This is an enemies to lovers story. The setting is the Regency period in the United Kingdom. I did wonder if it would be a take on  Jane Austin’s Pride and Prejudice, but apart from the time period, I was wrong.

Blurb

Chemistry sizzles between Lady Marguerite and the Duke of Argyle. Will she be able to reconcile reason with passion?
When the arrogant Duke of Argyle makes an offer for her hand, Lady Marguerite Lennox is quick to refuse, thinking him arrogant and aloof.
Her parents are disappointed she has turned down the best catch in the matrimonial stakes. The duke himself is reeling from the insult to his ego. He decides to pursue her as he has never pursued anyone before. His aim is to conquer, to bend her to his will.
When the duke steals a burning kiss at a ball, sparks fly. Marguerite is struck by lightning, but is terrified of getting burned. If passion wanes, she fears her life will be bleak.
Margueriteย is the story of a man who is obsessed with a feisty but kind womanโ€”who loves him but does not much like him.

Story

Marguerite has an English father and a French mother. Her father, Lord Lennox, had been an envoy for the British Government in Paris, but had now returned to England with his wife and daughter.

Marguerite was introduced to Society on their return. The balls, house parties etc are quite simply a means of young people finding a suitable marriage partner.

Marguerite draws a lot of interest. She has been brought up to have a mind of her own, unlike most other young women of the time, who are expected to be meek and accomplished in such things as painting and music, but not anything that uses their intellect.

One person who is drawn to her is the Duke of Argyle. He is not very pleasant, and when he asks her parents for her hand in marriage, she adamantly refuses.

I don’t want to say any more as I don’t want to add a spoiler.

Characters

Marguerite: She is, as I said, a young woman who knows her own mind. She is determined to marry for love and not wealth or position. Her mother regrets her decision to turn down Argyle as he’s a wealthy man and a duke. Marrying him would make her a duchess. But Marguerite dislikes him, and refuses him, even though a part of her is drawn to him.

Marguerite is a kind person and she doesn’t restrict her kindness to those of her own class, as is shown when she helps a poor woman, and a young woman who is finding it difficult to fit in with the snobbish aristocrats as her father, although wealthy, is โ€˜in tradeโ€™.

Duke of Argyle: I did wonder if this story should have him as the protagonist as he has the biggest character arc. At the beginning he is a man who feels entitled to respect. But he doesn’t do much to earn it. He was orphaned early and came into his inheritance. Although his father had been somewhat profligate with his money, Argyle has a good brain and by judicious use, has gained a fortune. However, he is known as a โ€˜rakeโ€™, and keeps several mistresses, and gambles at cards. He is also somewhat disdainful about the society he finds himself in.ย 

Until he meets Marguerite, he attends few balls.

However, his growing love for Marguerite encourages a change in attitudes.

Alice: Alice is Marguerite’s cousin. She helps Marguerite with her entry into society. However, she isn’t strong-minded like Marguerite, and fits into what a young woman of the Regency period should be. 

Charles: This young man is in love with Marguerite, although he never declares it. He is a bit wishy-washy in my opinion. Not a suitable match for the firebrand Marguerite. If I met him, I think I’d probably quite like him, but consider him a bit meh!

Writing: On the whole the writing was quite good for a first book. No major grammatical or spelling errors.

The point of view in the story is from several viewpoints. We see Marguerite and Argyle, mainly, with occasional forays into Marguerite’s mother. Not a problem as it’s clear who we’re with.

I was a little confused at the beginning as the book opens with Argyll asking for Marguerite’s hand, then goes back to things that led up to it. It was quite a long way into the book before I realised that.

I would have liked to see more emotion shown by the characters, and how they felt inside, but it wasn’t really problem. I enjoyed reading it.

I give it 4*

 My ranking of books.

In order to get a particular number of stars, it is not necessary to meet all the criteria. This is a guide only.

5* Exceptional. Wonderful story. Setting well drawn, and characters believableโ€“not perfect, but with flaws. Will keep you up all night. No typos or grammatical errors.

4* A thoroughly enjoyable read. Great and original story. Believable setting and characters. Very few grammatical errors or typos.

3* I enjoyed it. Good story. Characters need some development. Some typos or grammatical errors.

2* Not for me. Story not very strong. Unbelievable and flat characters. Setting not clearly defined. Many typos or grammatical errors.

1* I hated it. Story almost non-existent. Setting poor. Possibly couldn’t finish it.

Meet Marina Montrose: Author, Artist, and Horse Breeder

Marina has just released her first book. It is a historical novel set in the Regency Period. I’m looking forward to reading it as I enjoy that genre, and have written two historical fiction books, myself.

Marina has kindly agreed to come and be interviewed on Dragons Rule OK.

Welcome, Marina. It’s good to meet you. It’s always exciting when one publishes a new book, but especially so when it’s your first. Congratulations. You’ve arrived at a place many would like to be. I hope your book is a great success.

Now to the questions.

Who is your favourite author?

This is impossible to answer! There are so many I loveโ€”and admire. Also impossible to choose a favourite book.

If that book isn’t a ‘classic’, what is your favourite ‘classical’ book?

My favourite classic has to be Middlemarch, by George Eliot.

If you have a ‘proper’ job, what is it?

My husband and I breed racehorses on a farm in Normandy, France, where I enjoy riding on the beach.

Why do you write?

I have felt the need to write since early childhood, but I never took myself too seriously. I scribbled down stories and was editor of our high school magazine, Sunny Days. I write simply because I enjoy itโ€”I donโ€™t agonise over it and I donโ€™t get writerโ€™s block because I have to steal time to do it.

Many of us feel this compulsion to write. I think if we were prevented from writing, we’d tell stories, either to anyone who would listen, or even just to ourselves.

Why do you write historical romance?

I like to write in a wide range of genres. I have written a number of short stories, some poems, two mysteries (as yet unpublished) and am working on a family memoir. I also write a blog, Letters from Athens, about art, books and other things that interest me. I like to have a few things on the go at the same time. During lockdown, I started re-reading Jane Austen and Georgette Heyer (whom I hadnโ€™t touched since my teens) and was inspired to write a series of Regency Romances, the first of which, Marguerite, was recently published.

Do you have any pets?

We have a huge ridgeback and a tiny dachshund. Guess who is alpha dog?

Haha! My aunt had a dachshund, so I know how feisty they can be!

If you could meet any 3 people, alive or dead, who would they be? Why?

Iโ€™ve always had a wish to meet Tom Stoppard, but this dream is over now, sadly. I adored his plays. Also Margaret Atwood, whom Iโ€™ve heard speak a few timesโ€”I just love her style and her sharpness of mind. Finally, Turkish writer Orhan Pamuk. He grew up in Istanbul at the same time as I did in Athens, and his description of life there (in his books โ€˜The Museum of Innocenceโ€™ and โ€˜Istanbulโ€™) is eerily similar to my experience, only more โ€˜orientalโ€™. I would love to have a chat with him a about it.

Yes, it’s a great loss . Like you, I enjoyed his plays.

Do you enjoy sport? Do you prefer to watch or take part?

I competed in show jumping for many years as an amateur at international level.

Wow! Impressive. I rode when I was younger, but never in any competitions.

Do you like art? Who is your favourite artist?

I am an artist as well as a writer. I love to draw and paint and I take part in a local workshop twice a week. I love to visit museums and exhibitions but I cannot name a single favourite artistโ€”there are so many fantastic ones, in all styles and eras.

I, too, paint and draw. I love the Impressionists especially, but the Old Masters were amazing.

Can you swim?

Iโ€™m Greek, of course I can swim! I spent my childhood summers barefoot and half-naked on island beaches.

It sounds idyllic.

Do you do any voluntary work? If so, what?

During the lockdown, I started teaching Greek online to refugeesโ€” unaccompanied minors who were confined in a shelter in Athens. Later they went back to school, but two boys have stayed connected to me. They are now working adults and we still keep in close contact. Iโ€™m also mentoring a wonderful Persian girl who came to Greece at fifteen not speaking a word of Greek or English. She is now studying International Affairs on a full scholarship in America. Long stories but so rewarding.

What a rewarding thing to do. And it’s really nice that you keep in contact with some of your students. I was a teacher until I retired, and some of my ex-pupils keep in touch via Facebook. It’s really good to know how they are going on.

And now a biggy. What do you think is the biggest problem facing the world today?

As usual, the inability of humankind to stop repeating the same mistakes. Reading Herodotusโ€™s Histories is an eye-opener. It is terrifying that human nature has not changed over the centuries.

Yes, it seems the human race is incapable of learning from its mistakes.

Thank you so much for taking the time to visit. I’m sure all your readers will enjoy knowing a bit more about you. I know I’ve enjoyed listening to your answers.

A bit more about Marina

Marina Montrose is based in Deauville, France, where she breeds horses with her husband. She is also an artist and writer. She writes Regency Romances, short stories and mysteries. โ€˜Margueriteโ€™ is her debut novelโ€”a stand-alone, but the first in a series.

Now about her new book:

Blurb

Chemistry sizzles between Lady Marguerite Lennox and Thomas, the Duke of Argyle โ€” communication, less so.

Newly arrived from Paris and enjoying her first London season, Lady Marguerite Lennox has no wish to be married and exchange dancing and flirting for boring wifely duties in a crumbling mansion. So, when the handsome but supercilious Duke of Argyle makes her an offer, she promptly refuses, even though it is a brilliant match. Being a duchess holds no charms for her and what is more, she thinks him arrogant and unlikeable. She much prefers her entourage of charming and amusing swains.

Thomas, the Duke of Argyle, will not take no for an answer. Piqued by her refusal, he decides to pursue her as he has never pursued any woman before. He is obsessed with her, although he thinks her headstrong, obstinate, and rude. But even after a burning, stolen kiss, and a house party full of tender and erotic moments, Marguerite is still unwilling to marry him. This is driving him insaneโ€”she is so different from any other woman he has known, he has no idea how to deal with her. 

The duke is tired of locking horns with Marguerite. But what will it take for him to win her heart?

I’ve started to read the book, but am less than halfway through, so it wouldn’t be fair for me to post a review yet. I will do so as soon as I’ve finished, both here, Amazon and Goodreads, as usual.

Here is a link to the book on Amazon.