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Wolf Awareness Week & The Fantasy Wolf Pack That Found Its Name

I was reading a post by Charles Yallowitz about it being Wolf Awareness Week.

These beautiful animals are much misunderstood. It seems that their reputation is not completely true. Here’s a link for some information of wolf attacks from the International Wolf Center.

The poor reputation, nay, even scary one, is due to tales like ‘Little Red Riding Hood,’ ‘The Three Little Pigs,’ etc.

I was surprised to learn that there are 38 subspecies of wolf.

Wolves are social animals. They usually live in family groups comprising a mated pair and their offspring. They hunt as a pack, cooperating to bring down large herbivores. All will help to raise the cubs.

There are no wolves left in the UK, the last one being shot in Scotland near Killiecrankie in 1680, while English folklore places the final English wolf’s death at Humphrey Head in the 14th century. As a result of this, there are no large predators to hunt the deer population, and so they have to be culled.

In Yellowstone National Park, in the USA, Wolves were not protected, the same as other large predators like cougar. Gradually they became exterminated.

The elk population then rose and decimated the vegetation. This had a knock on effect on the whole ecology. In 1995 the first wolves were released in Yellowstone, from Canada.

There has been talk of reintroducing wolves in the UK, but the problem is the density of the human population, as I see it, especially in England. There is also much understandable opposition from farmers, so I don’t think it’s gonna happen! If it does, it’ll probably be in Scotland where there is more uncultivated land.

If you are interested in learning more, there is a good Wikipedia post on them.

Talking of wolves, and wolf packs, you might like to read The Wolf Pack, Book 1 in The Wolves of Vimar series. Here is an extract where the group decides to call themselves Wolf.

As they sat, they heard a howl. It did not seem too near, but Kimi looked at Fero for confirmation of her assessment that there was no danger. Seeing Fero’s relaxed attitude, she allowed herself to relax too. Then they heard a sound from near the fire.

Fero looked round, and saw Thadora had woken at the sound of the howl, and sat bolt upright clutching her sword in her hand.

Fero went over to her.

“It’s all right, Thadda,” he said, using her pet name to reassure her, “That is the cry of a normal wolf. They don’t attack people, especially a well-armed group like we are. Nor do they come near fire.”

“Those others damn well did,” she replied. Thadora looked around, wild-eyed.

Fero tried to reassure her. “That group was very strange. I told you at the time. A pair of unnaturally intelligent dire wolves led them. These others near here are just a normal pack.”

““Ow’d yer know?” Thadora demanded.

“I saw them yesterday when I went out to scout,” he told her. “When the others wake up, we”ll go and look at them. If you watch them for a while, you will see what they are truly like. They are not the fearsome beasts that people tell about in children’s stories, and tales related by travellers in the taverns. Those tales are all made up or greatly embroidered to frighten people or make the tellers seem brave and bold.”

The early morning saw Fero and Thadora moving through the forest towards where he had seen and heard the wolves. “Do you know how to walk quietly, Thadora?” asked Fero as they neared the place for which he was heading.

“You know it!” came the reply. “Hey! It’s a requirement o’ th’ job o’ a bloody thief. It’d be so no use if yer wake folk by bangin’ about.”

Silently, they slipped through the rapidly lightning forest until they came out on an escarpment overlooking some flatter land. The trees disappeared here, and they could see the Grosmerian plain spread before them. To the east, the hills continued to rise to meet the mountains, but to the north and west the plains began.

Tracts of forest and open countryside separated small farmsteads They could just make out the lights coming on in Roffley, a day’s journey away, as people rose to their morning tasks.

Fero held out his hand to warn Thadora to be silent. They wormed their way forward on their stomachs, and looked down from the cliff top to the plain below. They found themselves about twenty feet above the plain here and below them they saw a pack of wolves.

Thadora watched the animals in fascination. They were obviously a closely-knit group, with the exception of one animal, much paler than the rest, who held itself aloof, or the others were ostracising it.

Fero whispered that she, (for it was a she-wolf, he told her) was a stranger, and probably trying to join the pack. She had not been there when he caught sight of them yesterday. Maybe she had lost her own pack. He told Thadora that pack sizes were usually between six and ten, but that ten was rare.  “More than about eight, and one kill would not suffice, and less than six and the pack would find it difficult to hunt down larger animals like deer,” he whispered.

He pointed out the alpha male and female to her. The alpha male was a reddish brown animal, quite large, and the alpha female was a smaller, black creature. Fero told Thadora that as a rule, only these two would mate, and the others would help in the rearing of the cubs. Another large black male had begun to sniff at the pale she-wolf. She was cautious and bared her teeth at him, at the same time, crouching down, ears flattened to her head. Of the others, one, obviously much younger, had a reddish coat again. She was obviously one of the cubs of the alpha male. There was another black wolf, slightly smaller than the very large one, and two greyish ones, one of which was a small female and the other was a very small adult male. Fero thought that the smaller dark wolf and the greyish female were probably littermates, the way they seemed to stick to each other”s company.

They watched for some time, and Thadora became fascinated. Then the large black wolf sniffed the air as the wind gusted and changed direction and he swung his head in their direction, gave a sharp bark, andturned and led his pack at a loping trot away from the cliff.

“Damn!” swore Fero, “Wind changed direction and he smelled us. We’d better get back to the others. They should be ready to leave and we’ve still got our things to pack up.”

“Thanks, Fero,” said Thadora on their way back, “But, hey, those wolves didn’t seem scary. I don’t think I’ll be such a bloody wuss as far as wolves are concerned in future.”

Fero smiled.

When they got back to the camp, they found that the others had indeed packed up, including Fero and Thadora’s things, and Basalt had made oatmeal porridge that he said would sustain them well for their trek. Fero and Thadora sat and took the wooden bowls of porridge they were handed.

The group sat around eating, then when they were finished, they wiped out the bowls, tied them to their packs and were ready to leave.

Fero saw to it that they put the fire out completely before they left, and they returned to the road.

Thadora was very quiet as they walked along. She had a frown on her face. Fero hoped that what she had seen of the wolves would help her with her fear.

She came up to Fero and asked, “’Ow common are th’ colourings o’ that pack, like?”

“Well now—wolves come in a range of colours ranging from very pale to black. However, the very pale coat of the she-wolf we saw trying to join the pack is not common this far south, although they are more so in the snowy north. Maybe that was why she didn’t have a pack. Sometimes albinos are turned out. However, she wasn’t a true albino. Her eyes were brown and she had some colour to her coat.”

“Hmm!”

When they stopped for a midday break, Thadora suddenly said, “Carthinal, that poem about soddin’ wolves that you ‘ad, right? D’you still ‘ave it?”

“Somewhere in one of my pockets. I expect. Did you want me to read it?”

“No, Mother taught me ter read, so I c’n read it by meself. She learned at Madame soddin’ Dopari’s, right? It were somethin’ th’ damn Madame insisted all th’ girls learn. Would yer lend it te’ me for a while?”

“Of course. You can keep it. I don’t know why I’ve still got it, since it seems to have no relevance to us or our quest.”

Carthinal gave the poem to Thadora and she took it and began to read it.

All the afternoon, Thadora kept perusing the poem as they walked. No one seemed to be able to get anything out of her, and they all thought her behaviour a little odd and out of character, but she had obviously been working something out.

Fero thought she was trying to work through her fear of wolves, but Kimi had the feeling it was something more. She expressed her thoughts to Davrael.

“I expect she’ll tell us when she’s good and ready, and not before,” her husband replied. Davrael was a man of few words.

“Yes, you’re right of course,” Kimi replied, linking her arm through his.

He placed his other hand over hers and smiled down at the small young woman with love. They continued in this way in silence.

Thadora did not reveal her thoughts until after they had stopped for the night. After they had eaten, she opened the paper with the poem on and began to read it aloud.

“The wolves will fight ‘gainst every foe
The balance to maintain,
But far and wide the pack must go
All borders they disdain.

“The pack contains the strangest group,
The one whose pride comes with her
And one who slips through every loop,
The wilful one, the tracker.

“The leader with his anger held,
The ones who hunt the horse
The rock that’s strong completes the meld
And makes the pack a force.

“In times of danger all must know
The wolf pack will be there.
They work as one. They keep their vow.
For each other they will care.

“I think this bleedin” poem refers to us.”

The others stared at her in surprise.

“What makes you think that?” queried Basalt

“It was, like, when I were watchin’ th’ wolves wi’ Fero. They seemed in lots o’ ways ter be like us, see. Th’ leader was a big, soddin’, reddish brown animal that made me kinda think o’ you, Carthinal, right? There were somethin’ about ‘im that seemed so kinda dangerous, but hey, ‘e didn’t show any behaviour to th’ others that made my feelin’ logical, see? I think it were just that ‘e seemed ter be holdin’ somethin’ inside o’ ‘imself, right? You give me that feelin’ too, Carthinal. An’ that, wi’ ‘is colouring an’ all were what made me, like, think o’ you.

“Then I looked at th’ others. We was all bleedin’ well there. A small black wolf, the alpha female Fero called ‘er, were you, Asphodel. Small and pretty, but wi’ plenty o’ spirit you know. Then there were a damn big, black wolf that were obviously Fero. A little distant, yer know. I noticed that ‘e sometimes wandered off, sniffin’ around—fer game I suppose, or danger.

“A small reddish one, much younger than the rest were me, see, while th’ two ‘oo was littermates and was always together was Davrael and Kimi. Th’ male o’ these were black too. Th’ other two were obviously Basalt, a small adult wolf, and a light-coloured female for Randa. The pale wolf were findin’ it hard ter get accepted inter th’ pack, a bit like Randa is wi’ us, like. (Sorry Randa, but it’s true, ain’t it?) Then th’ large black, Fero, showed interest in th’ pale wolf. Don’t look away, Fero. I’ve seen yer eyes on Randa when you think no one’s lookin’.”

At this comment, Fero hung his head and Randa frowned and pressed her lips together, but Thadora continued, “So I wanted ter look at th’ damn poem again, right? Here is ‘ow I sees it. Th’ wolf pack in th’ poem is us. OK? I’ll ignore th’ first verse as I don’t know what that means. Th’ second starts to describe th’ wolves. “The one whose pride comes with her” is Randa. Hey, you are rather proud an’ ‘aughty yer know, Randa, and th’ “one who slips through every loop” puzzled me at first, but I think it’s me. I seem to allus manage ter get away when some bleedin’ person is on me track for some damn scrape or other.

“Now the “wilful one” I think is Asphodel, right? You told us you ‘ad to leave ‘Ambara because you’d annoyed the bleedin’ Great Father o’ th’ temple by disobeyin’ orders because yer didn’t agree wi’ them. That’s wilful! And “tracker” is obviously Fero, OK?” She paused for breath and looked round at them. They were all looking at her with interest.

““The leader” is Carthinal, right?” she continued. “You seem to ‘ave a ‘idden anger too, Sometimes not so ‘idden, either, Carthinal, so that fits in wi’ “with his anger held.” “The ones who hunt the horse” are Davrael and Kimi, though strictly speaking you don’t ‘unt ‘orses, but ‘erd ’em; and finally, Basalt is “the rock that’s strong.” Basalt is, I think, a rock. Is it strong?

“I’ve not got no further wi’ th’ meanin’ o’ th’ first verse, but th’ last obviously means that we must stick t’gether and be as a wolf pack.”

“Maybe,” said Basalt sceptically, “but it could just be coincidence, couldn’t it?”

“I think Thadora is right,” Randa disagreed, surprisingly agreeing with Thadora and earning a sharp look from Basalt, and a murmur of  “Of course. Never do to agree with a dwarf!”

“Basalt, don’t be like that,” whispered Kimi. “She’s a right to voice her own opinion.”

The dwarf stopped grumbling and sat scowling to himself instead.

Randa continued, “Look at it this way then. We were unsure as to how many of us there should be. This poem makes that quite clear. There should be eight of us. It makes it clear who should be here.” Here she threw a glance at Carthinal and Basalt who had been reluctant to have her in the group at first. “Those wolves that Thadora and Fero were watching served to jog Thadora’s mind about the poem and to set her thinking. Yes, I agree it refers to us, and someone has put those wolves where we would see them. Everything seems to be happening rather too conveniently for it all to be accidental.”

Asphodel had been thinking as well. “The first verse,” she said slowly, frowning as she spoke, “refers to the Balance. Some priests believe that in order for the world to work, there must be a balance between good and evil. Just as there is night and day, so we can sleep at night and wake in the daytime refreshed for our daily tasks. We, it seems, must maintain the Balance and to do so, we must cross borders and travel far.”

“And last verse say we must “Work as one and keep our vow,” and look out for each other. Much like wolf pack. But we have make no vows, do we?” This came from Davrael. “Well, not all to whole group.” He smiled at Kimi as he spoke of vows.

“Well, that can be remedied,” Carthinal spoke for the first time in the discussion. “We have a representative of the gods here.” He gestured towards Asphodel. “I’m willing to swear to protect you and treat you as the brothers and sisters I never had.”

The others agreed, and they all stood in front of Asphodel.

Carthinal thought for a few seconds and then said, “I think I have the words. I will let you decide if they are appropriate before we swear.”

When they had heard his thoughts, the others concurred and he said, “I will be as the wolves, and learn from them how to live for the pack. I will put the good of the pack before my own good, and protect the other members to the best of my ability. I will follow my destiny wherever it may lead, and through whatever dangers may befall, serving the pack and the land in all things. This I swear, and may the gods hear my vow.”

They all agreed the words were good, and all joined hands and repeated them.

Then Thadora said, impulsively, “We are Wolf.” and the others repeated her words.

So was born Wolf, from a group of unlikely companions, sworn to each other and to the world.

And a review.

Amanda GRIFFITHS-JONES

4.0 out of 5 stars A Perfectly Set Scene

Reviewed in the United Kingdom on 24 September 2019

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Occasionally I step out of my comfort zone & read a book that takes my into unknown literary territory. This was one of those times. Within a couple of chapters I was drawn into a world of mages, elves & mystical creatures & thoroughly enjoyed the ease with which the author breathed life into her characters. The scene is set perfectly as a quest unfolds, allowing the reader to become absorbed in a fantasy world that holds many surprises. I’ll definitely be looking out for book two in the series.

If you want to read The Wolf Pack, it is free on Kindle, and also comes as a paperback, hardback and audio book.

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The Real Danger of AI: Are We Forgetting How to Think?

AI is everywhere these days. Almost everything we have any contact with is AI in some form or other.

Fears About AI

One thing we must remember, though, is that AI isn’t sentient. It’s only following what it’s been programmed to do.

People are afraid of AI. They wonder what the rapid growth will entail, and will AI eventually be the cause of the end of humanity. I say that’s possible.

The Robot Army and AI Takeover

What most people envisage is AI taking over. There are several ways that Sci-Fi has shown this.

There is the robot army. Humanoid robots with weapons fighting the army. Constructing new robots to replace those destroyed by people. Quickly effecting repairs on injured robots far more quickly than flesh and blood can repair itself.

Then there are computers. These wage a different kind of war. One where they put people into jobs to perform certain tasks, and as they have no concepts of things like boredom, they insist people continue with their allotted tasks ad infinitum. Perhaps they will begin to control reproduction. Perhaps they had human autocratic masters in the beginning who were harsh with anyone who did not comply with their orders. The computers would continue to enforce these rules and laws even when their masters have disappeared.

AI in the Arts

Another thing people worry about is if robots will take over their jobs. I think this is a much more real problem. I saw a video of a humanoid robot sweeping the floor in a house. There are those which cut grass without supervision, build cars in factories where there once were lots of people working. Now only one or two.

Then there are the Arts. Will robots be writing our novels, writing the music we listen to, painting pictures we visit in Art Galleries? And is it important as long as it’s good? Which it isn’t at the moment.

AI in Medicine

Created with Bing AI

The medical profession. Do we want to be interviewed about our illnesses by a computer or by a real person? What about our teeth being filled or extracted by a robot, and not a humanoid one at that? And the carers? Do we want robot carers?

These are all concerns, and I’m sure you can think of many more. But what I think is the worst part of all this AI business isn’t any of that.

Everyday AI We Already Use

AI tells us what to do in many cases, already. I’ve consulted AI about a problem I had transferring photos from my phone to my pc. Yes, it was good, on the whole, but it didn’t foresee some of the problems. But whenever we ask Google a question, the first thing that comes up is AI.

  • Drive a car? It tells you when you are straying from your lane. It’ll tell you if it thinks you’re tired, you can get cars that prevent you from getting too close to the car in front.
  • You can tell it where you want to go and it’ll calculate the best route and tell you as you are driving, where to turn, and when to get into which lane.
  • We can now, using QR codes, tell a restaurant what we want to eat before we get there.
  • Our Smart TVs ask if they should suggest something for us to watch.

All these things mean we don’t need to make decisions for ourselves. AI will do it for us. This means we’re not using our brains.

The lack of using our brains to solve these little problems means that there will be an increasing stupidity and inability to solve problems. It’s already starting!

We used to have to have a map, read it and then plot our routes manually. We used to have to decide what TV programme we wanted to watch. We didn’t have Amazon suggesting what we should buy based on what we already bought.

The Real Danger: Forgetting How to Think

This is what I consider the real danger of AI–the downgrading of human ability to think.

You can call me hypocritical if you wish, but I did use AI in the production of this post. I used WordPress’s Agent. The words are mine, the pictures from Pixabay, except the one I created with Bing, just the layout is from AI.

What are your opinions on AI? Do you think it’s a danger to humanity, and in what way?

Online Scam Ads Exposed: From Deepfake Celebs to Fake Products

Recently I’ve been seeing a lot of ads when playing games on my tablet. I checked on many of them and found they are misleading at best, and fraudulent at the worst.

That inspired me to write this post.

I contacted the game developer and had the reply that they get their ads from Meta. They said they’ll look into them, and in all fairness, some of the ads I’ve complained about have decreased significantly, but there are still too many. In fact, I would almost say that the majority are scams.

AI generated image from Pixabay

These are divided into several groups.

Common Types of Online Scam Ads

  • Play to Earn Money: These ads show games where it appears you can earn significant amounts of money. One actually says that the actor (I assume it’s an actor) earned enough to give up her job and play the game 2-3 hours a day, earning enough to live. Another group have a poor person, always looking dirty! who can’t afford to buy food. She may attempt to steal either money or food. A kind person asks for her phone which she hands over. To a complete stranger, no questions asked! The stranger then downloads an app. She plays and immediately ‘wins’ a large amount of money. These ads are misleading at the least. The games do not give out anything like the amount of money suggested. They give pennies only for each game completed. Many of them have impossibly large amounts that have to be reached before you can cash out, and sometimes cashing out is made extremely difficult. Some don’t give you the cash at all.
  • Deep Fakes: These ads use an AI generated image of a well-known celebrity who is endorsing something, often crypto. These are fake. AI generated videos use captured samples of the celebrity’s voice, and videos made from photos or other videos of the celebrity.
  • Celebrity Impersonation: Another one is using Mr Beast’s image in the same way as above. This one shows Mr Beast handing out huge amounts of money to random strangers. He then says that you can ‘earn’ vast sums if you download his arrows game. He says he wants to help people. Now the real Mr Beast has nothing to do with this game. It’s a scam.
  • Fake Products: These scams do actually have a product for sale. The ones I’ve seen are for a top with a built-in bra, a birdbath fountain thingy, advent calendars with amazing gifts, like lego, model vehicles, model highland cows, etc. And there’s one with a robotic puppy. If you buy from these, the product is shabby and of poor quality, or not as the ad says. The puppy one shows a very realistic puppy, running around and snuggling up to its owner’s face, just like a real puppy. It’s very appealing. But it’s AI generated, and the actual product apparently only moves forwards and backwards, and squeaks! Most of these have difficult return procedure: extremely high postage, or no return procedure at all. You may not even receive the product.

Every time I see an ad that looks appealing to me, I go to Google and ask if it’s legitimate. Most aren’t!

How to Spot a Scam

Of course, there are those that are legit, like the Red Cross, PayPal, the RSPCA, Vintage Cash Cow etc. But I warn you to be EXTREMELY CAREFUL about responding to online ads.

Always check their website. If an email address is a generic address, like Gmail or Hotmail, it won’t be genuine.

How to Protect Yourself

Here are some practical steps to protect yourself from online scam ads:

  • Search before you click. If an ad looks interesting, Google the company or product name plus the word “scam” or “review” before doing anything else. What comes up will tell you a lot.
  • If it sounds too good to be true, it is. No game will pay you enough to quit your job. No stranger online is giving away free money. No celebrity is personally endorsing a crypto scheme in a social media ad.
  • Check the website carefully. Look for a professional domain (not Gmail or Hotmail), clear contact details, a returns policy, and secure checkout (https://). Poor grammar and spelling are also red flags.
  • Reverse image search. If a product ad shows amazing photos, drag the image into Google Images to check if those photos appear elsewhere — often they’re stolen from other sites.
  • Check reviews on independent sites. Look for reviews on Trustpilot, Reddit, or consumer watchdog sites — not just reviews on the seller’s own website.
  • Report scam ads. If you see a scam ad, report it to the platform (Meta, Google, etc.) and to Action Fraud (in the UK) or your country’s equivalent consumer protection body.

The best defence against scams is a healthy scepticism. Take a moment to pause and check before you click, download, or buy — it could save you a lot of money and frustration.

How I’m Using WordPress AI to Improve My Site Content

I’ve been using WordPress’ AI to improve my site.

I don’t think this is cheating as I couldn’t do it on my own. It’s not like writing a book or story using it.

Anyway, so far I’ve done Meet Vivienne (was About Me) and My Fantasy Novels.

I’d like you to take a quick look and see what you think. I think it’s a great improvement. Thank you AI.

Not in a good place.

I’m back from my holiday, but am now, as the title says, not in a good place. I have lost my enthusiasm for writing and haven’t done any for weeks. I hope this passes.

Personal things have raised their heads, too. I don’t want to go into them, but they are affecting how I feel about things.

I can’t bring myself to write my regular blog post at the moment, but I will still visit and comment on your posts. I may even reblog some if that’s OK.

I hope things will get back to normal soon.

A Little Holiday

You may have (or not) noticed I’ve not posted this week. I’m trying to finish a story and it’s taking me forever. It’s supposed to be a short story, but it’s getting too long.

I’m going on holiday at the end of this month, too. It includes the first week in June, so I’m going to take a break from blogging until I get back. Then I can hopefully finish the story and get on with my historical novel.

I will, however, read your posts!

Review of Alone by Anna Michelle Page

Overview. 

This was an exciting read. It had me turning the pages anxiously wanting to know what happened next.

Story.

London is a spy. She works for the CIA and has been sent to Korea with a special mission–to destroy a particular weapon that the North Koreans have been developing.

But London is a damaged young woman after abuse, and has decided that being alone is safe. She has no fear of dying, and in fact looks forward to it and fully expects to die on one of her missions.

Then she meets the Commander. He is a South Korean, leading a small group of men, who are devoted to him. He observes how she handles a persistent soldier from the US army who is pestering her, and becomes fascinated with her.

London tries to reject the offered friendship of the Commander, but he is understanding of her problems, although he doesn’t know any details. He gently tries to get her to trust him, much like winning the trust of a frightened deer.

She, in spite of not wanting to like him, finds herself being drawn to him in a way she finds unsettling.

But her mission is dangerous, and she expects not to survive it. She has not reckoned with the Commander, though. He manages to extricate her, but she has to go into hiding as she is pursued by an assassin after her mission to destroy the weapon.

Blurb

Alone Trained to survive. Destined to be alone. Until him.

London moves through the world as a ghost—unseen, unstoppable, untraceable. Trained for precision, she leaves no loose ends. But the military town of Cheondochon, South Korea changes everything.

Posing as a saloon girl at the Whiskey River, she hides in plain sight, where deception is her greatest weapon—until the Commander crosses her path.

He sees through her disguise, sensing the predator beneath the surface. Their connection is undeniable, dangerous—an attraction that threatens to dismantle her mission and expose the secrets she has buried deep.

Then the operation unravels.

A brutal attack by a DPRK assassin after she takes out a secret super engine, forces her to confront a past she thought was dead. Killing the man who once controlled her should have been justice—but instead, it shatters everything. Her mind fractures, her memories slip away, and the Commander makes an impossible choice. Hidden among monks in Japan, she rebuilds, heals, remembers.

Now, in England, she waits—not as an assassin, not as an agent, but as a woman. Waiting. Hoping. Longing for the day the Commander finds her. When he does, can London face the one mission that ever truly mattered – love?

Characters

London. This is not her real name, as we learn later in the book. She is a hard woman, made so by her difficult past. She is dangerous, clever and a killer for the CIA. She slips in and out of places unseen, if she so wishes. She knows she is safest when she is working alone. In spite of being a hard character, I found myself liking her. 

The Commander. London realises this man is her equal in combat skills, sneaking, bushcraft and spying. She hopes they won’t be pitted against each other and that his death isn’t what she is required to accomplish.

On his part, the Commander hopes the same thing. He quickly realises that she has been badly damaged by her past and wants to help her. 

In spite of being a tough soldier, he is kind and sympathetic, coaxing her from her skewed view of the world.

I liked him a lot.

Joe. Joe is also working for the CIA and is the man who organises London’s missions. Unknown to her, Joe is in love with London.

Claire is also a CIA agent, posing as an American woman running an American bar. She dislikes London, partly because of Joe’s infatuation.

Writing.

Ms Page has given us a page turner. After the first few pages, I was gripped by the story, thanks to the excellent way the characters were portrayed,  and the pace of the action. There were also a few quiet moments that were well written, showing the softer side of these tough people.

The grammar was good, and there were few, if any, typos.

Just one factual error that didn’t spoil it for me, and wouldn’t be noticed by most people. Ipswich, UK, isn’t a seaside town! Not far away, though.

An enjoyable read that I would recommend to anyone who enjoys a good adventure story.

I give it 5*

 My ranking of books.

In order to get a particular number of stars, it is not necessary to meet all the criteria. This is a guide only.

5* Exceptional. Wonderful story. Setting well drawn, and characters believable–not perfect, but with flaws. Will keep you up all night. No typos or grammatical errors.

4* A thoroughly enjoyable read. Great and original story. Believable setting and characters. Very few grammatical errors or typos.

3* I enjoyed it. Good story. Characters need some development. Some typos or grammatical errors.

2* Not for me. Story not very strong. Unbelievable and flat characters. Setting not clearly defined. Many typos or grammatical errors.

1* I hated it. Story almost non-existent. Setting poor. Possibly couldn’t finish it.

A Chapter Removed from The Wolf Pack.

The half-elf leafed through the book he was studying. He was due to take the tests to end his apprenticeship soon. He was a tall, handsome young man, just over six feet with shoulder-length auburn hair, a closely trimmed beard and eyes of an intense deep blue. 

He sat in the study at the home of Mabryl in Bluehaven, which was situated on the south coast of the land of Grosmer. With him were Mabryl’s other two apprentices, fourteen year old Tomac and sixteen year old Emmienne. 

Tomac pushed a lock of his unruly dark hair out of his eyes. ‘I think that’s the Master coming in now, Carthinal. You’d better get looking as though you’ve been doing something instead of moping around waiting for that letter, or you’ll be in trouble.’

Mabryl, his master and adopted father had sent off to the Mage Tower in Hambara asking for the young man to be considered for the tests at the next opportunity.

As Tomac spoke, the door opened and Mabryl entered, shaking his cloak as he did so. ‘It’s pretty cold out there, and it’s turning to snow if I’m not mistaken. Unusual this far south.’ He turned to his three apprentices. ‘Have you finished the tasks I set you?’ He hung his cloak on a stand by the door. 

Carthinal stood and ambled to the fire, putting a fresh log on to the flames. ‘Come and get warm, and, no I’ve not finished. I can’t settle to anything until I hear about whether I can take the tests soon. I think Emmienne has finished though. I can’t say about Tomac.’

‘Nearly,’ replied Tomac, jumping from his chair and carrying his workbook to his master. ‘I was a little stuck on the moon phases, though.’ He ran his fingers through his hair. ‘It’s complicated trying to work out both moons at the same time.’

‘Stick to it, youngster,’ said Emmienne from the window seat. She grinned across at the younger boy, the grin lighting up her otherwise plain face. ‘I had problems too, but it comes eventually.’

Tomac groaned and went back to his seat.

‘I’ve finished though, Sir,’ she said. ‘I’ve learned that new spell you gave me and am sure I can make it work. When can I try it?’

Mabryl laughed. ‘Such enthusiasm. We’ll try it tomorrow, I think. In the meantime, I’ve made what I think may be a big discovery. Perhaps the most important one for many, many years. Look.’ He put an ancient-looking book on the table. It had a red leather cover that sported a few cracks and scratches. On the front, in what had once been gold lettering, was the name Armron Filibur.  

The three apprentices gathered round.  

‘I think it may be a spell book from before the Forbidding,’ Mabryl said 

Emmienne gasped. ‘That is old. And if it is, we’ll be able to find lost spells. You’ll be famous, Sir.’

‘Calm down, Emm. It may not be the spell-book of a magister, or even an arch-mage.’ Cardinal smiled at the girl . ‘It may only have the spells we already know and not any of the lost ones.’

Around seven hundred and fifty years previously there had been a war between conflicting mages. It caused such devastation and hardship that, when it had ended, the king forbade the use of magic on pain of death. He ordered all spell books to be burned. 

Some mages, however, hid some of their books and these came to light occasionally. 

During this time, much knowledge was lost and now mages worked to try to re-discover the lost spells. If this book were to be of use, it would need to be taken to one of these mages.

The door opened and Lillora, Mabryl’s housekeeper entered. ‘Sorry to disturb you, sir, but a bird arrived a few minutes ago. I thought you should know.’ She glanced towards Carthinal and grinned, a twinkle in her eye. ‘Probably nothing important though.’

‘I’ll come and look,’ Mabryl stood and left the three apprentices to their own devices.

Carthinal picked up the book and leafed through it. He could understand little of what was written there. Firstly it was in an archaic script and language and secondly he was as yet only an apprentice and had not acquired the knowledge to understand more than a limited number of spells. 

He frowned as he tried to read the words on the page. As he lifted the book from the table to take it nearer to the light, a loose page fell onto the floor. He stooped to pick it up and realised he could read it, unlike the rest of the book, and that it was not a page fallen out, but a note that had been inserted there. He took it to the window seat and sat by Emmienne to read it.

‘What’s that?’ The brown-haired girl strained to read it upside down.

‘I’m not sure.’ Carthinal wrinkled his brow. ‘It fell out of the book Mabryl bought, but it’s not the same writing, nor is it in the same archaic script. It’s a note of some kind.’ He paused to read it.

As he read the note, Mabryl came back holding a piece of paper in his hand.

‘It’s good news, Carthinal,’ he told the young man. ‘There’s a space for you to take your tests in the next batch, which take place just before Grillon’s Day. As that’s in about five sixdays we’ll need to leave here soon to allow us time to settle in before your ordeal. What’s that you’ve got there?’ He strode to the window seat and looked at the paper in Carthinal’s hand.

‘It fell out of the book you bought,’ Cardinal replied . ‘It doesn’t seem to be by the author of the book though. It’s in a more modern script that I can read. It doesn’t make much sense though.’ He handed it to Mabryl who read it, then reread it, this time out loud.

‘“When Kalhera descends from the mountains, and orcs once more roam the land,

When impossible beasts occur and the Never-Dying man is once more at hand.

Then the Sword that was lost must once more be found; only it can destroy the threat

And kill the immortal mortal to balance out his debt.”

‘It does seem a strange thing to write,’  Tomac said, ‘and it doesn’t make a lot of sense either. How can Kalhera descend from the mountains? She’s a god and the gods don’t come down to Vimar.’ 

Mabryl turned the page in his hand and saw some more writing on the back. 

‘This says it’s a quotation from something the writer heard and wrote down. The author says he visited the Oracle on Holy Island and this was what he was told the Oracle said earlier in the day to no one in particular. Only the attendants were present.’ 

He replaced the paper in the book on the table and turned to Carthinal. ‘We must take this to a colleague of mine in the Mage Tower when we go. She’s working on finding the old spells, I believe, and this may be of use to her. The loose note may be a prophecy if it came from the Oracle, but who knows when it was made? It could be that it was centuries ago, or yesterday; and it could be referring to a time well in the future or even in the past. I think we should ignore it for now. Lillora told me our lunch is almost ready, so I suggest we go to the table before she gets mad.’

The three apprentices forgot all about the book and the note as they enjoyed the housekeeper’s excellent cooking and after the meal they returned to their studies. 

Mabryl gave them all tasks to complete and went out again, taking the book with him.

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Duke Danu of Bluehaven had trained at the Mage Tower in his youth. He had some talent for magic, but with the death of his elder brother in an epidemic, he had to take over the duties and prepared to become the duke one day. He had never taken the tests to end his apprenticeship, but he retained an interest in magic and still practiced it in a small way. ‘To keep my hand in,’ he told people. 

Today he sat in his study going over the accounts of the duchy when a knock came at the door.

‘Arch-mage Mabryl to see you, sir,’  his butler said.

‘Send him in.’ Danu rose from his seat and clasped Mabryl in a hug. ‘You’ve not been to visit in some while, my friend,’ he scolded. ‘Busy with your three apprentices, I suppose.’

Mabryl smiled at his friend. ‘Yes, they keep me busy. Carthinal’s ready to take his tests and become a full mage now.’

‘Is that so?’ Duke Danu raised an eyebrow. ‘Doesn’t time fly? Hardly seems any time at all when you took that scruffy little urchin off the streets. Everyone thought you were mad, you know–taking a street child to be your apprentic, then adopting him? Well, we were wrong. He’s turning out all right.’

‘Considering his background, yes. He still has his faults and I can’t say there weren’t times when I agreed with you I’d done the wrong thing. He still needs to control his temper better and his good looks don’t help him to control his baser instincts. Girls, and older women too, flirt outrageously with him, and he enjoys it a little too much! But I didn’t come here to talk about Carthinal. I’ve made a discovery and I want your opinion.’

 He pulled the spell-book out of a bag at his side. ‘I’m going to take this to Yssa at the Mage Tower when I take Carthinal. She’ll be the best to decide how important it is.’ He handed the book to Danu.

The duke whistled. ‘This is important, Mabryl. I can’t read it, but it certainly looks like a spell-book to me. It’s old and could easily date to before the Forbidding.’ He picked up the note that was still between its pages. ‘What’s this?’ 

‘A little note that was in the book. Carthinal found it. It doesn’t seem to belong to the book though, and I’ve thought it could be a hoax; someone putting a seeming prophecy in an important old book.’

‘Maybe, but I don’t think so. Some research I’ve been doing suggests that Grosmer is about to face some danger. This may be a prophecy about that. I would suggest you take it to Rollo in Hambara when you go. His library’s much more extensive than mine and he can find out more. I’ve been in touch with him about this possible danger so he knows a little of what I suspect.’

‘I don’t know Duke Rollo,’ Mabryl replied. ‘He may not believe me. I’ve heard he’s a suspicious man. I think there is a possibility this note is a hoax even if you don’t. I’ll need to prove that I’ve come from you.’

‘I’ll write you a letter to give to him.’ Danu ambled to his desk and lifted his pen. ‘I’ll also give you this.’ He picked up a small statuette of a trotting horse, about three inches long and two high that sat on his desk. ‘It’s one of a pair we found in our adventuring days. He has the other. He’ll know I’ve sent you when he sees that, especially if you ask him about the other one. Now, go and sit by the fire and I’ll get some wine for us to drink while we talk about other things.’

The two old friends spent the afternoon remembering past times and gossiping about the goings on in the city of Bluehaven as the afternoon passed into evening and the duke’s work lay unfinished on the desk.

If you would like to find out more about this prophecy and what it means, click on the book title in the sidebar.

(This was supposed to be scheduled for next Tuesday, but WordPress, in its wisdom, has decided I should post it now! So this is next week’s post early.)